A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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"It rubs the lotion on its skin or else it gets the hose again!"
On another note, very much glad to see Barrier not go through with the kill my favorite pony plan.
5668510 Yeah, just couldn't justify going through with it with Barrier's personality. Since it's not a thing that'll happen, I'll throw it out here; originally, he was going to go to kill Luna, but Luna didn't resist and essentially feels she deserves it and as such, he can't bring himself to do it; was going to spiral into a sobby/emotional bit from there. Then there was the whole shipping fiasco but that may still be implemented so that won't get posted here.
I'm not really sure what to think of this story as of this chapter, given that the murder plot, which was the main thing that was really interesting about it to me, isn't on the table anymore. There isn't really much motivating me to continue reading about an original character I don't find particularly likable and an unimportant side-character I just don't really care about. I'm not sure what you were thinking dropping the primary plotline and character motivation,pretty much out of nowhere, was going to improve, as such.