A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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Interesting chapter. I can't wait to see how this progresses.
This chapter is great so now all that's missing is for Magic Barrier to find a worthy opponent who is extremely similar to him and yet they both hate each others guts and eventually devolve into a twisted and destructive love-hate relationship where they try to foil each other in a similar manner to Death Note! They would also be trying to outdo each others perverted-ness to the point that it seems like they are experiencing immense sexual tension/frustration to the outside observer. Also for this theoretical opponent, make them another species such as a Griffon, Dragon, Human, etc. For the gender...just pick whichever fits and is the more amusing.
5869071 Do recall that we have two sources of food. (Three if you count my chickens but I don't feel like sharing.) Our gruel, and if he stops feeding us, we still have each other. And since I have a bit more protein in my diet, I'm pretty sure I can take on Izanagi.
5869143 Then I would starve and he would have to find a new editor, and I know he doesn't feel like doing that. Maybe if we're really lucky, we could get a toilet down here!
Ahh, another good one. :3 Wooot!
5869182 But then he would have to spend money on the tube and go to the store to get the tube, so I doubt that'll happen. He already is upset about the amount he pays for gruel and having to go find chickens.
This chapter was very interesting. Very well-written, especially the conversation with Wing and the playful teasing between Barrier and Octavia. I wonder how Barrier will interact with Chaconne.
5869409 That's the part Wing wrote. :3
Of course Barrier would climb the wall, because taking the stairs like a normal pony is too pedestrian. The better question is how many ponies need a regular bodyguard... Maybe Photo Finish or Sapphire Shores?
Silly maid, letting her threats get away from her like that. But should that be breath?
5870291 Mm, depends if you only reference respectable ponies. There is an entire criminal underworld to some extent at this point. I do however, have a mare in mind for the whole bodyguard spiel. It won't be terribly played out since we're approaching the end of the fanfiction though. Maybe a bonus chapter later on perhaps.
Also, fixed, thanks. :3
5870464 Mm, the murder idea was scrapped simply because I would have broken Barrier's character too much if I had tried to force said plot. Also, that was never the primary plotline, by any means; there was never any real plot-line in that sense. The focus of the story, since it's creation, was to primarily be slice-of-life and his day-to-day with whoever I shipped him with, which in later chapters, I feel it has become. Sorry that I disappointed you, but the attempted regicide simply didn't add up with the character I was trying to write. In any case {whether you finish the story or stop} I thank you for your comment/time.
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I'm afraid I'm going to have to bow out, then. Slice of life stories, especially if there seems to be no real ending point to them in sight, aren't really something I enjoy, because they all seem to end up pretty much looking the same eventually anyway. Still, I have to compliment you for coming up with a really interesting original character concept and the pretty good writing chops you've shown off so far. It's just not my kinda thing.
5870636 All good. Thank you for reading this far and thank you for your feedback. Best of luck in your future reading endeavors.
5871800 That's what you may believe, but I have plans for those bones far beyond simply using them as armor. Also, my most recent chicken ripped the last hose to shreds, so he would have to get a new one.
5871836 And she tore up the hose before I ate her.