A Royal guard, banished alongside Nightmare Moon, returns with her. This is his life after being thrust a millennium into the future.
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I like what I've read so far, but it's very little to go on thus far. I look forward to more chapters.
You may want to separate some the text to indicate a transition, it currently seems like no time at all passes when the armor's taken off, even though Magic Barrier was apparently knocked out for days.
5550310 Thank you. I wasn't exactly sure what to do to signify the passing of time...I didn't want to just put a bunch of space for fear of it looking ignorant but...yeah. ^^; I'll add the space in from now on. Thank you.
5550349 I find a good way to do so is by putting hr in between some brackets Like these []. It gets results like this
I hope this helps.
5550359 I ended up putting a section-break in to split the scenes up. I think it worked...better than before, at the very least.
5550401 I think it works better as well, it makes things much clearer.
5550414 Right, back to chapter 3. Thanks again for the advice.
5550419 You're welcome, I hope this helps.
Thus far pretty good
Omg thats sad. Poor guy
Yeah... Doesn't take a brain surgeon. Magic in his name, already said he looks like Shining aside from color... He's Twi and Shining's ancestor.
Okay. Sure. Why not?
Huhm.
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After 1000 years, assuming roughly human lifespans and family sizes, he's a lot of ponies' ancestor.
For a conservative estimate, let's say each pony has two children, and the average age when they do so is 30 years. That's upwards of 30 generations between then and now, so we get 2^30 descendants in this generation. That's slightly over a billion.
Of course that's completely ignoring confounding factors and oversimplifying in the extreme.
Still, it might be harder to find a pony who is not related to him.
Geez, that amount of injuries should be enough to kill someone!
6823986 magic.
6823986 man he's MadeOfIron
Poor dude, that's some heavy news.