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Mr Dorito


Anime is Japan's revenge for Hiroshima

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as long as the other chapters go good...

Hmm... I think I'd like to see more of this. I need a little more information before I choose. I really want to see how this fic incorporates mass effect into the lore and more importantly, some roflstomping to slaver scum.
Here's hoping this goes well

6141823 Mass Effect will come later in the story.

Please don't ever cancel this this is a peace of art omg I need more

Two things
One
Love the red vs blue reference

UNSC officials picked Director Leonard Church to lead the project since he led Project Freelancer.

Two
Just curious but does Chief exist in this universe and does he play any part in it or no?

6181181 Everbody still exists, Noble Team, Master Chief, Agent Locke, etc. But the first parts of the actual Halo timeline still happened so people like Spartan Samuel-034 still died.

6181181 Everybody still exists, Noble Team, Master Chief, Agent Locke, etc. But the first parts of the actual Halo timeline still happened so people like Spartan Samuel-034 still died. Plus, I have not decided if characters like Noble Team or Master Chief will take any part. It will mostly be my OCs.

6191032 Are you talking about that one comment I made at a thread? Anyway Lester is a character in GTA V. He plans, hires people, and helps you out during heists.

Awesome start, can't wait to read more :pinkiehappy:

I truly hope this isn't dead.

6637627 It's not. I'm just very busy with school.

This sounds Great; but the prologue makes me feel like he gets over the slavery thing quickly and ends up not caring.

He's a spartan and his sole duty is to protect the human race and the UNSC. I don't think him even establishing branches or helping the ponies in any way sounds good.


Still something I can't wait to read, though.

6782053 It will actually be a team if Spartans, Sangheilis, and Jiralhanaes. The convoy disappeared back when Humanity just began to colonize space so at this point, its disappearance was largely forgotten.

6782067 the brutes will kill them all:pinkiecrazy:hehehe

6792383 Yes, yes they will. And then eat the survivors.:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Well they create this giant wormhole which puts us in a pocket dimension and then teleports us to whatever coordinates we're put in

You have no idea how slipspace works, do you?

7120236 Well I'm not as indept with the Halo lore nor I'm I very informed with anything technological. I'm more of a ww2 history geek, but I do love reading Halo fanfictions which is why I started this one. I know I've neglected this fic and my two Displaced fics, but my latest fic became the most popular by far which is why I was focusing on it.

7120450 Writers must do research. It's a rule.

7123878 I know, I neglected that for this fic because I thought I knew enough about Halo to make a decent fic.

7123918 Eh, I've wrote worse... and then deleted it.

7123959 I'm not going to delete this one. It's my very first fic and I planned to continue it whenever I have the time besides life, school, and my other fics.

I knew it the timeline was all too familiar. Did you wrote a Mass Effect x Halo fanfiction on Fanfiction.net? because I specifically remembered the acronym OSA from that fic

7380613 I didn't write it, but I was trying to bring the concept to Fimfiction. The 2 Fanfiction stories with this concept were very popular, but are now dead. I plan to continue this story sometime.

Literally 10 minutes ago I just read feet first into hell

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This story is in limbo currently. I have not decided if I should continue it or not.

OH LORD, YOUR ALIVE

8461374
You can clearly see I've been alive this whole time if you just check my homepage.

Now that I think about it your probably right

“Well, I was ordered to bring these colonists to a new planet that was named Tribute. Over 200,000 people are going to be brought there aboard the Endeavor , Voyager , Enterprise , Challenger , Ranger , Columbia , Gemini , Explorer , Soyuz , Apollo , Spatium , Manifest Destiny , Conquer the Stars , and Artemis .This is the biggest colony fleet ever assembled so far.”

Reference to Star Trek?

December 19, 2584: OSA AIs hacked into the surviving computers onboard the destroyed Xeno ships and learned about everything about this Citadel Council and their races including the locations of planets belonging to the Turians who attacked the Shanxi Defense Fleet. The OSA Council amassed an armada of about 1,000 ships near Shanxi to attack the Turian Fortress world of Gothis.

A CROSSOVER, IN A CROSSOVER, CONTINUE THIS PRICELESS DIAMOND, THERE ARE LIKE 3 CROSSOVERS, RED VS BLUE, EVEN IF ITS STILL SET IN THE HALO UNIVERSE, MASS EFFECT, AND MLP, HOLY SHIT, FUCK MY ASSHOLE WITH BARBED WIRE, CONTINUE THIS!!!!!!!

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Wasn’t intentional. Most of those ships I named after Space Shuttles are NASA probes and satellites.

8880802
I may when I feel like it. Problem is Halo hasn’t really given much to inspire me lately.

We need an update here!

Comment posted by coopda deleted Aug 12th, 2022

While it's unlikely that this DIAMOND of a prologue will get any follow-up any time soon, I'll still put it in 'tracking' in the vain hope that I'll ever see an update.

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