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Mr Dorito


Anime is Japan's revenge for Hiroshima

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You sir, have piqued my interest! Keep it up. :moustache:

Even if you're just a civilian who's weapon experience is limited to video games and Hollywood...well, long and sarcastic explanation short, this isn't how explosive devices of any kind work.

Comment posted by Mr Dorito deleted Jun 11th, 2016

7295281 Um, if you really want to know, Celestia ran into a trip mine, and yes, I am just a civvie who's knowledge of explosives is limited to movies and video games.

7295301 I'm just going to take a guess here, but you're just a kid aren't you?

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...bag one of the White Masks weapon suppliers in Rio de Janeiro. Alexander Rojas, you know him as Alex the Red.

Nice Modern Warfare 2 reference, but just thought I should let you know that it's Alejandro, not Alexander.

7295962 Yeah my bad, haven't played MW2 for years. You sure that's the only COD reference you found. There's actually a really big and obvious one.

7295857 I'm 18 actually. I'm more of a video game/military history geek. Never really paid attention to all those technical stuff.

7296220 It was so obvious in the beginning, but still got a good laugh out of it, that I almost forgot. If the operators didn't have last names, I would've suggested making either Valkyrie or Blackbeard related to Dempsey, and Jäger related to Richthofen (Takeo would have to wait until we get some Japanese operators).

7296315 I would've, it would fit in so well.

7296596 Though I do need to ask, what was it did I do wrong specifically. Just to avoid further mistakes.

The only easy day, was yesterday... really
The zombie crew.
And Rojas.
You have a problem an unCodly problem.

7298209 I tend to reference anything. I just felt like referencing COD in this chapter, no matter how much COD pisses me off.

7298728 Why would COD piss you off its the "best"
...after every other shooter
Oh good story btw.
(even though i prefer Mute to Kapkan)

7298765 Eh, just tired of playing COD for years. They barely seem to change and the fanbase is still full of kids who started with Black Ops 2 and think they know everything about COD. So I pretty much switched to Battlefield.

7302401 Level 101. Waiting to get an Xbox One before buying Battlefield 1.

ACE 21 CQB is one dirty weapon. So fucking accurate. I love it.

7302523 Never really liked sniping, nor could I fly for shit on the helicopter. Best I can do is fly straight. I'm more of a brawler, mostly using the ACE 21 CQB and the DBV-12, but use the L865A2 occasionally on Operation Locker. Though it's fun to kill people in Rush as the Attacking Team in Operation Locker using the EOD Bot.

7302872 I was hyped about watching the Battlefield 1 multiplayer gameplay, but then I heard the female voice as the announcer and I heard stupid names for objectives. Apple, Dove, Edward? Yeah, leave it to the British to give them retarded names. In my opinion, each nation should have their own names for objectives. So you hear Americans call "A" Alpha but when you're British they call it Apple. Why do the British come up with retarded names anyway? I've always think it's because they're so polite, they don't want to make their military codenames seem threatining. You should see how the British named American planes they had in WW2. Fucking retarded.

7302898 Remember it is just a beta, the female voice is problably just a placeholder

7307656 Yeah I know, I'm just stating my opinion on it.

7307758 Also a youtuber that played that said that butter edwards and apple arent gonna be on the final game, and if they do who the fuck cares?

7314270 It just sounds retarded for a military game. Maybe it will work for a game meant for children, but not Battlefield.

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It was the military photonic alphabet during WW1. It was changed during WW2.

So the second Rainbow Six: Siege fanfiction arrives on fimfiction...

I'll be sure to give it a read. Interesting that unlike me, you use the actual names of the operators.

7326369 Yeah, I didn't want to change anything.

7314341 still you should focus on gameplay, not that

7332257 I know, but I like to pay attention to details.

7685866 I will when I have time and feel like it. This is just a secondary story. I've focused most of my efforts on another fic.

Comment posted by ReformedNightmare deleted Jan 9th, 2017

It's spelt Jäger btw :3 and I'm loving it so far please keep it up

7881747 I know, but I don't know how to make the 'a' like that with my laptop.

Keep up the good work. Really liking it so far.

So is this story dead or are you planning a super secret come back party? :pinkiehappy:

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I do have a lot of plans foe this story, but when I want to update is unknown right now.

over six months since the last comment. no faith in me i see. need i remind who can? kapkan!

8666117
I do have ideas for the story, I'm just lacking any motivation to write it because of my other two stories and school.

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Right after I update The Greater Empire, I will update this fic, and then work on The New Mentor. I intend to make this my schedule.

1. The Greater Empire
2. The Everfree Hunter
3. The New Mentor

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I’ll work on the next chapter as soon as I’m done with the next chapter of one of my other stories.

UnU need them chapters papi

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