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POV: You're feeling down at Bee-lzebub's party and she's about to shove some cotton candy into your cakehole.

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It's been about 4 years since the last time I spent Hearth's Warming with my mother before she went missing.
I've been crying about it every day since then.

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It would be the most sadistic thing on both planets if I posted Metallica's "Am I Evil?" somewhere on this story. Be it in the comments or in the description.

Late night reading of sad fics are somewhat relaxing... the best part is I have no idea why...
Good work! :twilightsmile:
Twas a great read.

5470367 Thank you! You are a gentlecolt!:pinkiehappy:

Just gonna ask something here: Were you in tears/close to releasing Niagara Falls from your eyes, or no?
I actually did cry through the making of this story, and it took two days to make.

5470367 One more: How'd you find this? By chance in the Sad group?

5473879 To be honest my IRL life has been rough and I barely ever cry anymore, but I was touched by the feels. :twilightsmile:
I am curious about one thing though... In your author's note you wrote "For my mother" I'm not trying to pry or anything like that, but was just wondering about its significance.
As for your second question: Yes, I did come across this by chance. I was doing some late-night / early morning reading
Nice OC btw :twilightsheepish:

5480335 Just conjured one up. He doesn't have a face, a backstory, or background information.
All we know is that his mother went missing 4 years ago, and he's been crying about it ever since.

5480335 If you thought that OC was good, you ain't seen nothin' compared to my primary one.

These events are all based on things that I experienced, unfortunately. Except the missing parent.

5480829 I just like bat-ponies :raritywink:

5480821 Is this a real person or fiction? I'm confused :applejackconfused:

5480993 I demand they become staple in the show at some point.

5481013 Bat-ponies already are... they were featured as Luna's guards in the Nightmare Night episode, therefore they are cannon. Only thing is they haven't made a reappearance since...

5481007 You were talking about the OC featured in the story :facehoof:
Still would like to know the IRL significance though :applejackunsure:

5481090 But, who's to say they were a byproduct of Nightmare Moon/her reformation to Luna? Much less, who's to say that the Royal Night Guards aren't the only Equestrian bat ponies?


5481090 If you were actually talking about my first OC (the dark tan one named Zef), that mystery is cleared up. The IRL significance was connected to an event that happened just one day prior to the publishing of this story.

5481153 As for the batpony ordeal, I wasn't saying there weren't possibly more out there... I was just saying that they do exist, although we have yet to see them again in the show.

Nopony ask about the inspiration behind this story. Just don't.

The mother sounds tropical-like kinda like my own OC. I'm brown with a half open coconut for a cutie mark. It's nice to have something to relate too in a story. Everyone has parents and most ultimately dread losing them. This especially goes for a young age like of that in the story.

I was trying hard not to cry for a few minutes and ended up releasing a little bit before I was even half way done with it! Great story. Thanks for writing it.

6638104 Did you now? I knew the story was teary, but I didn't think someone would actually cry from this. Thankest thou for thine most gracious comment!:derpytongue2:

6638104 To be dead honest, because of the circumstances that inspired this story, I did cry the whole time while writing this. My mom and I made up a few months later, but trust me, I'd never felt that bad before in my life. To this day, I hate what I did.

this is really sad... made my cry. :fluttercry: excellent writing!

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