Philomena didn't want to go. But when that sweet, cream colored pegasus birdnapped her, she felt it was time for a little payback.
Please note that this is my first write, so while i am willing to take critisism, as i don't really know what i'm doing here, admittedly, please don't unleash your fury on me if it's bad. Thank you.
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Hoo dowgy, this sounds like a heap of a fun story, but ah need to hit the hay. More 'n happy to read it later though.
That was nice, looking forward to more!
Nice, looks pretty well written to me!
I'm enjoying the story, but there's one thing that really bugged me.
It's phoenix, not pheonix.
That (or those, since you were consistent) is really the only thing I noticed. I look forward to more!
516381 derp, thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix it later.
Oh, by the way. The reason this went up so late was because I finished the second chapter at around 11:00 PM and it had to go through moderation.
I finally found a fitting picture for the description, by the way.