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Ahah....It says F.U.C.K.E.R.S....
Loving the references, please continue this story has my attention. (grammar and spelling aside)
5324515 Where there a lot of spelling grammar types of stuff, or just a few that really stood out to you?
5325529 There were a few that stood out that I knew of. I'm not the best at it myself, but even I find things.
Sounds like its time to go Humanity on them cows.
Where's your inquisition when I pop a cap in yo ass!?
HA!!!
Amusing so far. I'll stick around to see where this goes.
FIRST!!!
Always wanted to do that :D
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Damn it... I wanted to do that
5610288 Myehehe
Re-reading so I can understand what happens in the second chapter and I can't believe I missed that reference the first time through.
Yay the story is going somewhere.
5622646 Glad you are enjoying the story, and Thank you for the comments.
Got to say he is a huge idiot, a point against him is that he didn't think to look up survival guides to help him, and when he encounter the herd he didn't actually look for other signs of civilization. Also most ranchers would have at least press criminal charges against him. The premise is interesting but the execution of it could be better. Good luck with your story.
5693665 He did look for something, but he didn't see any fencing or ear tags so he kinda wrote them off as un cared for. The Laptop is a mess, and he thinks he knows what he needs to about survival so didn't bother looking anything up in the mess the laptop is in. The beef chart was a lucky stumble.
Add to that: he won't admit it he is also lost, confused and hungry so not making the best choices and he does stupid things.
Throw in that the story was started purely to have a human willingly and unapologetically kill for his own survial and you get what happened. That said the story is evolving beyond this now that it has focus. Once it gets rolling I will likely revisit this chapter.
AH SHOOT, mate sorry, but this is NOT edited. I'll do it right now, STAT
...why am I picturing him kicking in the palace doors, with the severed head of the Inquisitor in his hand, screaming, "I'm back, bitches!"
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That would most likely be the ending to the story. Nuff' said.
I love this story! I think it deserves more views, I can't expect for the next chapter
Why can I see the cover art? It's broken...
6647265 Yes, yes it was. Have a new one now that better fits the way I intend this to go. That said open to new cover art if anyone has a suggestion PM it to me.
Ah shoot, oughta to edit it... My smartphone broke a little...
very good, i c an't expect the next chapter, this story deserves more views
First
This has been an interesting read, if not one that's in need of some proofreading. Looking forward to seeing where this particular story goes.
Wheres the Spanish Inquisition? I came here expecting them.
7118574 Next Chapter, then again a bit later.
7113425 ...Not really, you're actually in a different position start from top to bottom rather than bottom to top.
pretty good, but why the hell didnt he try to sneak up on him? why in the WORLD would he fucking say *stop fiend*??
THE SPANISH INQUSITION
To me that makes no sense at all. dunno why tho
Nice. I also live in Idaho. What city? Boise? Twin Fall's? Idaho City?