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But there is already one collab completly like this.
Uh?
5273719 Yes, except there, it's not just my story. Here, I've collected the stories that I've written for that collab prompt in one easy to find location, instead of having to go through some 40+ pages of stories and comments. It just expedites things for everyone.
Ah…typical Twilight Sparkle… high on the science and logic; rather low on the common sense.
Twilight is a natural at this.
Wow.
8120756 I'm actually working on a revision of this chapter as I'm not satisfied with this initial chapter. I should really get back to doing that!
8120769 I'll confess, I feel a little torn given how canonically Chrysalis continues to be a dictator-minded antagonist, whereas at the time of writing, there was the fanon notion of Chrysalis' Canterlot invasion due to a desperate mother/queen wanting her subjects feeding on the abundance of love present in the land. It would have been an alternative universe either way, but it just harder to fit her into the desperate mother/queen role the more the canon show progresses (at this point in time).
I'm really digging this. It's a solid, gripping that really lays on the seriousness of the situation. Better grammar than most stories here, for which I am not surprised. It's one of many cases where fan theories far outshine what we get from the actual show. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
That said, there was one teeny tiny error I noticed.
Also known as the 'slice of life' chapter. Just a lot of pleasant, peaceful nothing happening.
Oookaaay. Well, at least I've learned something because not even I obviously have imagined everything there is to imagine yet.