I'm sure we've all read a fanfic about fluttercord (if not then you'll need to go else where).
Well this is what happens when Discord gets bored during story time and decides to join in.
There's not much more to it, a simple, short story that wanted to be a charming little love story but well I'm strange and love 4th wall braking so this came out.
There are some suggestive bits but it's more of a joke than anything else.
As always any feedback would be greatly appreciated and sorry for it taking this long but meh, stuff happens.
This storys word is Kiwis.
Chapters (1)
Not bad ^^
A funny little story.
(I'm really bad at giving writing advice, sorry XD)
I enjoyed that. I could visulize Discord breaking the fourth wall. I couldn't fine a fault with it.....
"ahem"
You wha?
"I was merely coughing to get your attention. And now that I have it, how can you find no fault with it. Can't you see he stormed off before it was finished and I had to finish it"
Urm Discord he started off the story.
"AND I finished it, you should be thanking me"
Aye whatever, Anyway it doesn't say your the Author of it, so you aren't getting and thanks from me. That is all reserved Muffin Man.
"FINE"
Could you not have turned him back to stone Author, it would have caused you less bother?
"I heard that".
You were meant to. Anyway Muffin Man, great job, I've added it to my faves.
"Is there any need for so many commas?"
I'm just ignoring you now Discord.
5228660 Thanks, I'm glad you like it enough to come up with that comment