Do I need to write more, who even reads this.
Vinyl makes her way home from a party, talks a bit, has fight with a door and talks with Octavia for a bit.
There's a small amount of romance-ish stuff. NO SEX but some adult kind of stuff.
It's kind of funny, I guess.
If you do read this comment the word apple so I can laugh at how much of a nerd you are. JK it's cool if you read this but for real comment apple. It can be like a club of some kind.
For some real information this took me about an hour to do, I'm not a good writer and I'd love to get some HELPFUL criticism.
Chapters (4)
In the famous words of Anon, "AND THEN THEY ALL FUCKED!"
Apple!
*goes to do nerd things*
...jerk...
Apple
So am I a member of th club now?
Apple!
Apple apple apple, apple apple!
APPLE!!!
5074315 Welcome to the club
5074288 Welcome, and I'm sorry
we can friend?
5074203 That's for next time.
5074749 Welcome to club
5074797 going to join the rest of us nerds in the nerdom of nerdiness? We've got plenty of apples.
This story was great. Just one small gripe:
Data? Did you maybe want date?
This is pretty good for your first story. It itself was charming and some parts were actually funny!
However, your use of mechanics and grammar might need to be improved a bit. So, keep on writing, my friend! 
Apple ?
In the words of a certain winning pony: "And then they
bangedmade love."5075128 I'd love to
5075233 Probably, i'm not very good with words that sound the same. sorry
5075645 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
I know my writing ability isn't the best and I hope I will be improving.
5076746 Welcome to the club.
5074801 >:)
5078064 Yay ?
Oh right, I forgot! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.
5078726 It's great trust me, we have apples
5078823 WWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLCCCCCCCCCCOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEE
5081143
Celery!
*applejack charges up to me with a knife*
Oops,sorry
Apples!
5086954 lol
welcome to the club 
nice humor, oh and apples
5087649 Thanks
and welcome to the club 
I have some good news for anyone that likes my strange idea of what comedy is, there should be a story up really soon and trust me it's strange.
Also thanks a tun for over 100 views, I was surprised when it broke 20 so to see that many people reading it not to mention all the positive comments, it's just wow.
Because of the general positiveness I am so motivated to keep on writing stuff.
Thanks so much and apples to all.
Appel
Every thing good but she plays thecelo not violin