A strange phenomenon is sweeping Equestria. Some think it's a disease, some believe it to be a curse. All that is known is that it takes from a pony his or her wings or horn. The two princesses have no idea what's happening, and the kingdom is in panic as everypony scrambles about to find a cure. Twilight Sparkle is working harder than ever before and she thinks she may have found the cure...
My first attempt at an adventure story, something with a timeline, rather than a one shot. Any feedback would be much appreciated, I want to learn how to improve. Thanks!
Chapters (2)
Great story so far.
MORE!
I shall await the next chapter. Keep the awesome coming!!
Oh no...*sob*...poor birdies...*sniffle*...I can't believe that I'M THIRD FOR ONCE! >:D
So, into the Hellmouth then? This should be interesting. I hope you put earth pony magic in the spotlight. After all, without an obvious external focus, it could be a secret weapon against these kleptogeists.
It would be superb if the cure was a spell...
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I take it nopony has thought of checking whether Discord is still stoned the way he's supposed to be yet? I mean, seeing how taking away horns and wings was exactly one of the first tricks he pulled on the Mane Six in the show, you'd think he'd be topping the list of suspects...he certainly was the first thing to come to my mind once I'd read the premise.
Sorry for taking so long, hope you can forgive me!
Well, at least now they know what to expect. Whether that's more of a good thing or a bad thing remains to be seen...
Yay,it's finally.....Aw darn im late again.....stupid internet.....
Still, i like (with caution) where this is headed.
Waiting on the next chapter. Keep up the awsome!!!