Good is good and bad is bad. But what if the Equestria that lives in harmony is not so good as it is made out, what if bad is good elsewhere and good in Equestria is...not so good?
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I assume that they're related to Sombra?
6836123 maybe sombra is shining armour's counterpart or something
IT'S ALIVE!!!!!!
*ahem* great story, can't wait for the next chapter
Hatred? I was thinking towards Lust, now that would be scary.
welcome back
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Negative.
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That's a surprise.
6836560 well Lust is a counterpart of love but partially
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I seem to recall Apathy being the opposite of love, but that is a lack of interest in the person. And I highly doubt a story could base on a kingdom that feeds on apathy.
I mean, you don't read or watch Chrysalis feeding on it, seeing as how it is an empty emotion.
Does he mean me? or.....
6836936 oh wait, never mind. I just remembered that sombra is the father of the mc
Edit: wait never mind (again) that was before the rewrite
Everyone complains
"Oh he doesn't write fast enough."
You know what I say to that? BS.
SaiyanUltima you are a great writer, this is my favorite story by you, and whenever I see you've posted a new chapter for this it makes me happy, because it has a great plot line, great OC's and most importantly it's well written.
So keep it up big guy. I'm rooting for you. BTW absolutely love Raven.
I have to say, ever since I started reading this story, I have been anticipating each new chapter so much that I freak the fuck out when I see it updated. I'll admit, the amount of time in between chapters is a little longer than I would prefer, but overall I'm fine with it. I understand that writing takes time and then there is editing and all the other stuff that comes with it, especially when writing multiple stories at a time. But I'm not here to criticize, just wanted to say keep up the good work and take all the time you need to assure the quality stays.
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"You have my powers, my temper...." Wait, last chapter Raven was commenting on how Derrick had his FATHER'S temper. Aside from the occasional continuity error or confusing pronouns/dialouge, this has been a good read. It's a bit awkward to read, but it has decent pacing and strong/well defined characters. On to the next chapter!
hatred is much powerful than love as it seems!
who wants to power something with pukey love?!
i could power my whole house with hatred all day, but not with love i cant love 24/7 but hate i can do that easily!
Hmmm i would have thought lust would be a cool paralel to love but hate works too
i do have to wonder does the hatred feed in a different way since a kingdom where every one hates another will fall (since well how can anything get done when one hates another and kind of hard for kids to happen too) or is ot hate for other kingdoms
They Must be trolling gods!
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The goddess of Hatred? If she ever finds the internet we're royally fucked.
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The power of love is bullshit, the power of weapons and violence however that's where the moneys at lol.
Didn't she say that Derrick has his father's temper.
Memory of what? This story literally says nothing about any strange event that involved his powers while he was on earth.
Never Mind
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He has his father's looks and compassion but he has as his mother's power and magic as well as temper and an evil black Cold Heart that is what Raven said
*Soviet Union Earrape Anthem plays*