Good is good and bad is bad. But what if the Equestria that lives in harmony is not so good as it is made out, what if bad is good elsewhere and good in Equestria is...not so good?
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finally!
I wonder what is going through the mind of Celestia right or what she is going to think if or when Luna decides she is no longer a part of Equestria?
More damnit this shit just gettting good.
No. No. Bad Luna. There is no recovery for ATTEMPTING MURDER!
Leave nebula and go back to being the sloppy seconds
Um a description on how he looks know would be noce or did i just happen to miss that
I can just picture Derrick clinging onto something real high up while Nightmare Moon keeps poking him with a stick and yelling " GET THE FUK DOWN FROM THERE; WHERE'S THE BEEFING"
Awesome job now u just have one question. Where's spike. He went with Luna then suddenly disappeared.
8024008 if you read carefully, he's with Discord atm.
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I broke that down in different sentences. The claws, the spider legs that retreat into his spine but can morph into what is neceasary, the horns that curve and the markings on the wall now etched yet invisible to his skin.
A paragraph of those details is quite cliche, so I broke them down.
8024711 oh i missed the horns and figured the spider legs and claws were more made of shadow summoned when he commaded not a permanent detail
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Thanks I see it now.
I NEED MORE I NEED MORE GOD DAMN IT AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
8023350 Here,here! Let them suffer for what they've done! Twilight Sparkle most of all!!! ?
No sex dammit!...Gotta remember that one.
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Sorry, but this story has it. If it bother you that much I will highlight the starting and ending paragraph so you can skip.
Love it!
8025148 Meh. I say celestia since she's been seeing someone on the side along side not using her fucking brain to confirm twilights claims
8025969 True, wait, WHAT?! Let them burn! >:) (My dark side always comes out with stories like this one)
First I tough mistress that does not sound right, then I remembered that it's an older term for wife. Go herd make many adorable children! May you be forever faithful an loyal screw Celestia!
8025251 no no i don't mind it i just found is response funny. pardon for any misunderstanding.
8026588 do you got a kik? I think we'llbe good friends
Saiyanultima thank you for the amazing story and this chapter specialy
I dont know if you knew but i loved the stories you used to write on fanfiction i go under the name lordofdarknessthe1st there
When do nightmare and derrick return to nebula
and where is spike?
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Well I will tell you like I tell everyone who speaks of my writing like that.
If you dislike it, then I hope you find something better, or to surpass me with a story of your own.
I wish you the best.
this is a great story.
Now we are cooking with fire, Perfect, a terrifying transformation. NICELY DONE
(Can we get a picture)
"Is it like a parasite?"
"... ... are... are you fucking with me right now? Is this you fucking with me, Derrick? No. No, not like the exact opposite of what I said it was."