Good is good and bad is bad. But what if the Equestria that lives in harmony is not so good as it is made out, what if bad is good elsewhere and good in Equestria is...not so good?
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I need the next chapter pls
Man, I love this story.
That looks like a scary ass monster can't wait for the next chapter.
Good stuff. I hope Raven can undo that Soul binding he is under. I hope she notices.
Fun story. More please.
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Soul binding? You mean between him and Nightmare Moon, or the reality seal?
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That thing that makes him love her, like really fast. I love that it could be real love between them. But that thing with the blood that Nightmare did gives me the hebejebes.
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Well it's not about making him love the mare, it's more of a connection she is using out of insecurity. Basically overtime his feelings would be felt and vise versa. His pain would eventually become hers. And the same for him.
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I see. Is she going to tell him?
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After he finds out. Drama in the future.
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Oh yes. Just what I wanted. I hope he's explosive.
So it can teleport through dimensions? Hmm, reminds me of those Gorgers from Final Fantasy XI.
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Gorgers are in Final Fantasy?
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Yeah. I never played XI, but I looked them up initially before you showed the general picture in the Author's Notes and turns out they are, but I'm not sure if they exist in other Final Fantasy.
Ironically, Gorgers are known to teleport around to confuse their prey, paralyze them with one bite from behind, then flesh on their flesh and organs alive. At least, based on the lore.
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Wow. I will be damned. And here I was thinking I made up a new word.
No. Seriously, I thought Gorger was gonna be a new monster word.
Take your 700th like, *grumbles* not like I need it or anything.
Why must you dem me to this cural fate of having to wait for more WHHHHHY!
Annnyway like this story so far and hope to see more
Oh the cliffhanger, it haunts all of us here. It forces us into a state of curiosity which we cannot remove. It is a curse upon us which we must wait for its removal. It pains us to wait for the next chapter...
So not only did Twilight have everyone betray Derrick, simply because he wouldn't share his mechanics with her, but she abuses Spike to the point of leaving? I hope Celestia strips her of title as princess and element of magic, disown her as her student, and banish her from Canterlot. And just to pour salt into the wound, I also hope her friends see her fro the bitch she is, and leave her.
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You have my thanks.
That Gorger is a stuff of nightmare's! Jesus christ that thing would fit perfectly with any horror game.