Good is good and bad is bad. But what if the Equestria that lives in harmony is not so good as it is made out, what if bad is good elsewhere and good in Equestria is...not so good?
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This shall be mighty interesting
I've been itching for more of this story, thanks for the scratch with this chapter , but now I'm itchin even more for moar:
BRAVO!!!!!!!
Bring me a crowbar?!
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All war games are exactly the same.
You run, you hide, you shoot, and then you die at some point and cuss a storm when some newbie frags you.
The way the story end with the crowbar is the best. I wonder does he have some kind of magic on him . Keep up the good work.
"Buck, get me a freaking crowbar!"
MORE MORE!!!!!!! LOL
crowbar
And thus the Universal crowbar
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Crowbar, you say?
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I like the new characters in this version of the story compared to the previous one.
That's why, huh
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That just made my day
Well then, Derrick is a human-alicorn hybrid, things just reached a new level of interesting, now I finally understand what you meant by that scary/insane/cuddly mother comment in your blog post. I was sitting over here scratching the hell out of my chin wondering what was going to happen, to me with this chapter, you delivered and then some.
Also seeing Sombra over there, I just remembered from the first version. Do you have intentions of having Derrick "test the magical immunity" by having himself used as target practice for Sombra throwing increasingly stronger bolts of magic at him? Just curious is all cause that was just one of those situations that made me chuckle - that sort of chuckle that borders on "that guy should be in a jacket" Shush you fool...Your fine.
Anyways, loved the chapter, real interested to see what the future holds.
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That and more with his self-testing of magic, possibly a little crazy mother at accidentally blasting him when she finds out, only to see if did nothing.
Something like. . . "Son!"
"I'm okay, Raven. Can't touch this!" (Commence the dance)
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Oh god not that song, it's looping in my head non stop now.
Must. Find. Way. To. Free. Self. *Feet and hands start to move to the rhythm of the music* Damn it.
Though Raven using her magic on Derrick, I can foresee one or two potential problems.
1) Raven being his mother and all, they share some kind of link, which actually allows her magic to affect him.
2) Big smoking crater, nuff said.
Man, all this theorising about what might come is driving me up the wall, I need to find something to do.
Holy shit! And i thought the previous version was good, you sir have made this amazing!
LOL That's funny. I can see Sombra and Nightmare Moon trying to pry Raven off Derrick.
*drinks some cola and when reading a certian sentence does a epic spittake* derrick her what!!!!!
*warning, long picture!*
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That reunion was hilarious! I think I like this new character and her back story.
6980211 LOL that is what would happen. Maybe they need a magic crowbar.
Cause of death:
Hugged to death by the Empress of Darkness. I guess that would be a dumb way to die.
mothers do have the bestest hugs!
even if you need crowbars to get them off you....
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Eh what about WARframe?
i find it better then COD
"CrapOfDuty"
well THIS is is certainly new!
A mother, no alicorn changes and staying human!
Yep, totally enjoying this story. can't wait to see what happens with Black Hole sun, and the negative 6? yeah ill call them that.
ONWARDS WITH THE STORY! :)
These three layers of horses are not fucking gods!!
Won't you come
To wash away the rain~
I can't have been the only one to think that...
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Soundgarden, yup
Is Moony going to get an anthro form, then, since Derek isn't going to be a pony?
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Of course they're not Fucking Gods, that title belongs to Lilith you silly filly.
They're Dark Gods.
On it
Let me guess, Derrick is her fucking long lost child?
Good god, this type of story is all but tiring to see at this point.