Good is good and bad is bad. But what if the Equestria that lives in harmony is not so good as it is made out, what if bad is good elsewhere and good in Equestria is...not so good?
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Okay i am confused did Celestia cheated on Derrick all this time?
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That will come to light soon.
the darkness is rising
7490309 will we find out in the next chapter as to why Celestia is sleeping with another man so soon after the Gala incident or if she has cheated Darren with another man??
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I promise that it will be explained in the chapter of Luna finding him.
7490420 but how long do i have to wait? *whines*
I'm scared for derick
7490421 a while probably but god I hope not
I almost want Luna to become a part of their 'special' relationship. If her love for Derrick is truly sincere. She made a mistake of standing next to her sister(family), and it cost her dearly already.
worth the wait
Wow, got a new chapter a lot sooner than I thought. Sweet!
things are starting to get spicy up in here
I hope Celestia gets smacked up the head for cheating and let Derrick deal with that other guy
Hue Hue Hue
One question comes to mind:
Where the hell did the other human come from? And I'm shocked by Celestia's committing adultery, especially after what she did.
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Can't tell you until Derrick's alicorn blood is triggered. I cannot go into specifics, but let's just say magic and royal blood is just the frosting of his heritage.
Half human and half alicorn, he will find out that he has the powerful instincts of a male alicorn, which will trigger when he discovers the truth—and when that happens, betrayal and lies will the least of Celestia's concern, especially when she sees Derrick again.
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Scary, but it still doesn't answer the question on where the other human came from. From what I read so far, Derrick was the only current human that appeared in Equestria and learns he couldn't return home, even before he learned of his heritage today. Unless... there is something, something that was kept from him by the Royal Sisters.
I want Luna to join the relationship I think she need another chance
longcoat?
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Not just that, but a talking longcoat.
*<>* I wanna see Luna show up and threw some act of dark magic unwillingly fuse with nightmare moon ...Like vegeta and Goku fuse .....cuz weren't they one being before or...???
I hope he gives Luna another chance! Update soon!
i was hoping Black Hole Sun was gonna love him as well as nightmare moon to be like their counterparts at the beginning.
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The behavior of Black Hole Sun isn't based on love or hatred—rather she is observant and critical with others. That's what meeting Derrick was about, while it foreshadows Celestia as the ignorant mare who welcomes everyone with open wings.
That's what I'm going for with her, but do note this—she does care for Derrick, you just won't see it so open in the story.
This chapter is very interesting to read keep it has my full attention now keep up the good work update more soon
I want to see luna like show up and be like. Suprise bitch
Love the overall story but Derrick as a character comes off as a self absorbed baby. I get he's been through some shit but most of his dialogue feels like whining, this was especially annoying in chapter 7. I'm going to give it a few more chapters but I can only take so much melodrama.
Great job on this regardless of my personal gripes.
I love this fic I cant wait to read more of your fics sayain!
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I'm feeling the same. Going to read on and hope it improves.
Welp, all I can say is.......FUCK YOU CELESTIA, YOU SHIT FACED, SUN-FLANKED, DOG CRAP, CHEATING SLUT, OF A PRINCESS. I'M ACTUALLY GLAD MY WAIFU IS LUNA(or Derpy) CUZ RIGHT NOW, I WANNA SHOVE MY FOOT SO FAR UP UR ASS, THAT WHEN PONIES ASK WHAT'S BROWN AND WHITE AND RED ALL OVER, I'LL SAY MY LEG WITH CELESTIA'S FUR AND BLOOD ON IT!!!!
Now back to your regularly scheduled solar deception, lunar repentance/rekindling, and midnight Amor.
Yeah, what she said
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The heck is all this from?
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It's in the chapter, were you not reading it?
Ok, first the virgin shield is annoying, but I guess your are making him pure or whatever, BUT, why is he scared all the time?? And why is he getting scare from anything, I couldn’t find any single description of him, that didn’t have the word scared on it. Maybe you are trying to make him look realistic or something , but he just looks pathetic.
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Bro you being sarcastic or what?... fck why am I replying to a very old comment 😂😂😂😂I just got into this mlp thing and I never expected to be this invested.