Good is good and bad is bad. But what if the Equestria that lives in harmony is not so good as it is made out, what if bad is good elsewhere and good in Equestria is...not so good?
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It's nice to know that Derrick is willing to give Raven a chance.
amazing chap
A chance I love it!!!!!!
Great chapter, I loved it. Others may complain about your speed, I think it gives you the suspense needed to wait for another amazing chapter. Keep up the good work.
Thrackerzodbrony
i just decide to read your rewrite yesterday and i most say.
I love it.
The development of Derrick's is way better than the ante-rewrite version.
Can't wait for more
The odd typo or strange choice of words aside, it's shaping into something quite engrossing. Keep it up.
6696078
Yes
I'm not sure that the term 'mama bear' is strong enough to describe Raven. I feel nothing but pity for any who attack her baby be it physical, verbal, or emotional.
It's definitely not bad but it IS boring enough to put someone to sleep man.
6710995
I'm not one to be a douche, but you've annoyed me enough to come unhinged as a writer and rebuke that no one gives a shit what you think.
You call yourself an angry reviewer, but all you do is bitch about everything under the sun in a story. If someone cracks a smile in a chapter, you complain about it.
For the love of god, get a life and stop being such a drag on Fimfiction.
Sorry, but your Sad, Angry, Little Man Syndrome is not going to drag me down in my work. If you want a story of your own liking, then get off your lazy ass and write it yourself.
I can't say that I love this new draft of this story. I was quite invested in the old one. I do hope you continue this story.
Dragonfox
6752546
I'm trying, but I just finished destroying the worm virus some jackass hacker sent me through one of my desktop links. Damn thing was intricate and complex to a breaking point of re-linked URL sources.
I had to break out my programming skills and break it down in thousands of codes before finding the core. Hence why I have not uploaded any chapters so far.
It was a freaking nightmare!!!
You know, every time I read the description, and get to this:
I think of this:
EDIT: Video got deleted, so just search "shenanigans super trooper" and you should find what scene I was trying to show.EDIT 2: Found a video
6766756
Trouble?
Maybe the developers put a time frame on them?
"He was as powerless as the last guard that tried to rape Midnight Estelle.". Last Guard? Does that happen often? You'd think the guards would be more reliable. Loving this story.
6711609 OORAH!
A chance. a possibility. So ....LOTS OF MORE DRAMA> GREAT LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED BOYS
One She acts extremely creepy, treating him like a literal baby. Two She has no right to do that to the guard, it was just one comment. I can understand why she would get mad but not enough to torture him like that
8182759
there are a lot of people in history that are evil but loved family unconditionaly
her acting like that is not to far off, from a mother who lost one of her children for years on end and then to be reunited.
she “IS” freking evil, nightmare moon is, sombra is and whoever else there might be
BUT there are (as i said) a lot of villains who would do everything for lovedones
think about Chaotic good or Lawefull evil like “Darth vader or Vegeta from dragonball”
and lastly from what we have seen from this dark kingdom so far, all thing are harsher than somwere else.
think about russia or North korea and if someone who protects high officials “one comment” can mean worse things than we want to admit