Good is good and bad is bad. But what if the Equestria that lives in harmony is not so good as it is made out, what if bad is good elsewhere and good in Equestria is...not so good?
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good to see you're doing better-- or as better as one could be...hope you're going to be alright dude.
How are things with your family and job? Rough?
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Job and family are great. It's the news and my mother's last letter that hit me harder than ever.
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I'm sorry to hear that
this story is even more awesome.
keep up the good work
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Don't worry about it.
To be honest, a few drinks, time off, and surprisingly good "fun" with my queen made it easy to push aside the pity and remember that she abandoned her only son.
Glad to see your back. Hope all is well
Just how many families members does this guy have?
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After this, there isn't anymore. Let's just say Faust twisted and turned some things to ensure her rightful place as the only goddess.
Big hint, but I'm feeling talkative.
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I'm sorry what was that? Did you say "abandoned"?
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Yup.
Great to have you back sorry about what happened with your family and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out but is the fake is Faust so what happened with the real Faust.
Great to have you back sorry about what happened with your family and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out but is the fake is Faust so what happened with the real Faust.
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I guess she wasn't nice?
Damn, I was hoping to read more about these 'True Elements'. Seems like the elements were cut in half, leaving their 'corrupted' halves behind someplace. Maybe. Chaos and Order, maybe? Much to think about.
The tentacles remind me of the ones from The Darkness. Just more affectionate.
If I remember correctly the name of the monster was Gorger, not Gorgon.
It's funny his tendrils remind me of the hands from Re:zero you know the ones with Betelgeuse.
Is he always so scared of everything? from everything he has seen and experience, one would think he would grow some balls but meh, honestly the story would make more sense if you stated that Derrick was 15 or 16. Then the cowardly attitude, the reluctance of sex and the childish attitude would make sense and even create a funny gimmick, but by making him 20 something your just making him look pathetic. Don’t get me wrong, the story, side characters and dialogue are excellent. That’s why I’m still liking the story, but the main character is stopping me from giving it favorite.