When Fluttershy finds an injured changeling in the Everfree Forest, she feels conflicted. She couldn't just leave him, could she? Things will work out in the end... right?
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Eh its very low quality story what can be improvised for sure
Characterisation is weak, fluttershy act nearly good but still there is things like that she won't go to everfree just like that (cmc episode with fluttershy shows that).
Plot line go way to fast, overall idea is not so great and you don't help with how fast you go with this.
5147637 If you don't like it, then don't read it.
5147680 I'd say they were giving somewhat constructive criticism
5147779 Constructive criticism is giving advice on how to improve the story. He only pointed out flaws without giving any way of improving.
5147795 hence why I said 'somewhat' constructive. He pointed out the flaws, do with the knowledge what you will
5147680 and that will i do
Ah, a Changling story, my favorite kind! And with Fluttershy, to boot!
Pretty well done so far, only a few left out words (simple things, like "of" and "to"), and it seems pedtty well written.
With Changlings being mischievous, and, generally, evil, you'd think they'd be great friends with Discord, no? And I don't recall any incidents (or episodes with both of them in it, for that matter) from the show, so will this divide between the two be explained later?
A changeling story is plenty refreshing within any franchise, especially "My Little Pony." :)