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You may have thought that Princess Cadance's love for Shining Armor was what gave him the power to defeat the changelings, but he didn't even do anything at all! This is what REALLY happened.

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This is honestly the dumbest thing to come from my head ever.

But you'll love it anyway, why do I care?

:derpytongue2:

1004 words. :raritydespair: Also, absolutely incoherent plot. :raritydespair::raritydespair:

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Certainly you didn't understand the element of "Random."

I personally enjoyed this. A GIANT GREEN THUMB WASHES UPON THEE!

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I tried to stretch it out, I really did. And I realize the plot is non-existent, that was kind of the point.

So it first started out as a different perspective nearly shot for shot of the wedding, then it went right into what I can only describe as a cliche Dragonball Z parody. All in one thousand and four words.

I... just... what? :fluttershbad:

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That is the exact response I was hoping for.

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That's why I put that image into my comment just because it started to get really unoriginal when Derpy Hooves was fighting against the Changelings.

Did you see it? 3 likes and 4 dislikes. I told you, show a scene and not tell words! :twilightangry2:

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jeez, at least be a little constructive :unsuresweetie:

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True, true. I'm too lazy to look for pictures as of now though. I wouldn't call it unoriginality as much as I would call it wasted potential. I can see a fic like this played seriously while maintaining a fairly original outlook... but not as it is.
By the way; I love your username and avatar. Aventures of Tintin is awesome. :rainbowkiss:

My feelings on this are mixed....
On one hand we have Dragonball Z cliche stupidity, On the other hand we've got a story in need of show dont tell.

...


Buck it

Thumbs up for the DBZ stupidity.:derpytongue2:

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I hate cliches!

They get really, really bored quickly.

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Eh, only when their taken seriously.

If their done with acknowledgement of their silliness, I can get behind it.

Gotta agree with Whalesbefreeyo here - the ridiculousness is fine. The writing itself actually seemed to be the weaker half of the equation. Especially with this kind of double derping fic, you really do need to be extremely showy and imaginative. If its a DBZ episode - we just read the transcript instead of watching with all the colours and flashes. :derpyderp1: I shall neither like nor dislike this.

...Muffin of power... I WANT ONE!
Derpy gonna derp :rainbowkiss:
cool story brony
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No I actually mean it.

haha, Derpy's a secret agent! this was really funny. on a different note, it's spelled 'vile' not 'vial' :pinkiehappy:

HEAVENJS, LEND ME YOUR STRENGTH! MUSTACHES OF POOOOOWAAAAAAA!!!!111!!!!!!!ONE!!1! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache: This is epic.

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