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Redhead With A Computer


Hiya! I'm Redhead (Though you can call me Red if you wish), and I write things sometimes and edit stories for you. I actually do a bit of everything on here...

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Have you ever done something so stupid, so crazy, you wonder how you got roped into it?

Fluttershy thinks the same thing. Somehow, her friends were able to talk her into going camping - in the Everfree Forest, no less! - on Nightmare Night. She'd rather hand out candy to the little fillies and stallions, but does she want to be considered a scaredy-pony? Nope! On the dreaded night of spookiness, hilarity ensues.

(After "Magical Mystery Cure" - Twilicorn for you!)

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Ranked 1st!? WHAT THE HECK!?

5140015 I like the premise, but I remembered that Fluttershy's house isn't open during Nightmare Night. Also, she shouldn't be afraid of the Everfree Forest.

5140030

It can still give her the creepos.

Comment posted by HB_DS2013 deleted Oct 14th, 2014

I love it. Especially the part where Rarity's mane catches on fire. :rainbowlaugh:

Hmm, I like this story. I really, really do! :pinkiehappy: Considering that this is your first story on this site (as of now), this fic is amazing! Your storytelling is gracious, and everypony's in character! There were only two little mistakes in your whole story.

Birds sung as the sun setted on the horizon.

The word "Setted" should just be "set".

Around thirty minutes later a fire had finally started and Twilight had pulled out the marshmallows and hot dogs

... I'm pretty sure horses (or ponies) are vegetarians. :rainbowderp:

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