• Published 3rd Oct 2014
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A Portrait of Perversity - LocalWriteDrone



You are surprised to find a gift from Celestia one day, two portraits of two very different mares, one the height of class and the other spunky and strange. Clop.

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Comments ( 16 )

Huh, well this might be interesting.

I'm not really one for BDSM, or DS in particular, but I'll be the first to tell you that was hot. Well done, I suppose.

5121854
I admit when brainstorming ideas my initial reason for including Azalea and making her so stuffy was just because it would be so funny to prank the hell out of her.


5142652
While I'm not so egotistic as to praise it as quality work or anything, I think any story that involves bdsm with a pony trapped inside of a portrait should default as 'interesting' by its very nature.


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It's an on and off kink for me, but I needed a way to demonstrate that Rosy was a creature of pure instinct and pleasure, not one who derives her pleasure from dominance, just the acts themselves. What better way to demonstrate this versatility than the most submissive role you can take in sexual congress? I'm glad you found it hot, I don't know if I'll be returning to BDSM themes with this one but there'll always be something new down the corner.

This is like Night at the Museum and that Courage episode's love child. It's pretty nice and very unique.

Um i was wondering will they be able to leave their portrait in the future.

Alsoi even thoough im not entirely into bdsm unless is well written and let me tell you it was sexy, really desciptive and really well paced the way i see it

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I'm glad the BDSM served its purpose well then, it's a fetish I love to write about but never get the excuse to do enough of it. As for if they will ever be able to leave their paintings, the answer is sort of. I have ideas, but if I go through with them, they WILL leave the paintings, but probably not in the way you're expecting.


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I've been seeing a few comparisons to Night at the Museum, which reminds me that I really need to see the movie at some point. I appreciate the kind words.

Im going to guess two ideas one i when they do lrave will look 2d or maybe he can enter them like because well fuck its magic

I'm enjoying this concept so far. :ajsmug:

Hmmm so Rosy seems to be a broken mare of sorts trying to seduce anything with a penis. Whilst Azalea (love that name by the way) seems to be a closet drunk afraid that one day her addiction might become on par with that of Rosy's. Loving this. Cant wait for the next update. And dont be sorry for the extra long chapter I personally prefer 5-16k long chapters to sit down and enjoy.

5143461 But not just Night at the Museum, that one Courge episode as well. Also, you're quite welcome.

Hey!
This story is awesome. And not just because of the porn. I love the concept, I love the execution, and I love the characters. I do hope you continue it so we get to learn a little about the two picture perfect ponies. This is definitely a case of I wish I had more than a single vote to give.

You ever going to write again?

Does Azalea sound like Iggy Azalea?

This is amazing, I absolutely love the dynamic of these two mares. I'll be waiting for more :twilightsmile:

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