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Daring Do479 stories ·630 members

Daring Do and the Diamond Compass

Daring Do returns from another successful adventure, only to be called upon by an old friend who unaware to Daring, is sending her away on another quest sooner than she thought.

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Sorren

Sorren #1 · Apr 22nd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

The idea's good. But you do need to work a little on puntuation. you are quite brutal with the sentence spilces. Most stories use ( " ) as quotations not ( ' ). And I recomend indenting paragraphs and spacing them as well. You have good writing ability. And good grammer. Punctuation is just a little harsh. But good work nonetheless. I like.

ARBPW

ARBPW #2 · Apr 22nd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

If the punctuation was fixed, I'd have given this a like. This was pretty enjoyable but the punctuation errors were distracting. For now, I'm just going to leave the rating alone.

Lukaspukas12

Lukaspukas12 #3 · Apr 28th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Wow, just wow. I think this is my favourite Daring Do Fic I have ever read, top job!

ARBPW

ARBPW #4 · Apr 30th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Chapter One has been proof read. Take note of the potential improvements I've mentioned. If you ever need me to take a look at future chapters, give me a shout.

Bodza

Bodza #5 · May 2nd, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

523065

Thanks a lot for taking the time to do so

Sorren

Sorren #6 · May 4th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Tis goog sir. Very nice Daring Do story. I have added it to the only Daring Do group I know of.

Voyna

Voyna #7 · Aug 24th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

Please sir may i have some more?

Bodza

Bodza #8 · Aug 24th, 2012 · · · Chapter 1 ·

1148637 Glad that you liked it I am trying to finish the second chapter soon, I'm currently on around 1000 words and plan to finish it around 2500. I haven't really been adding to it though but I'll do my best.