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ShouldNotExist
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If a furry and a brony get it on I think it's technically incest.
Celestia is really clutching the idiot ball tightly here. I mean really, advocating the death of a creature soley because others caused trouble in the ancient past? If that's how you treat them on first sight maybe they had a good reason for causing trouble.
What's up with the random assortment of letters and numbers?
Is it a game!!!!! Ohh boy I love game!!
Hah, now Celestia is eating her words! She can't go abusing him now, given his actions. Add to it the fact that Rainbow Dash might just be infected with lycanthropy, her little spiel about how all of his kind are inherently evil is probably going to bite her in the ass. Oh, how I would love to see that happen.
not as good as the other one just saying i much prefered it to this but it is still better than most of the werewolf stuff thats on here
Aww I thought the numbers were a game..
They say they're treating him for a disease, but everything about Luna says they intend to persecute him. Guess nobody noticed he healed Rainbow Dash. Says alot about the situation if everytime he breaks out of imprisonment he helps someone.
At first I was thinking Luna might be more reasonable, but it seema she's heading towards the same position Celestia was taking. I mean really, putting him on trial? For what? For breaking out of a cage that was specifically chosen because it would harm him? For stopping a rampaging dragon? For saving Rainbow Dash's life, or healing her injuries? It obviously doesn't matter, his only "crime" is existing. If they want to hurt him that badly, they'll find a reason to justify it.
It still looks like Celestia and Luna are flat out the villains in this. At the beginning of the story Luna seemed somewhat reasonable, but that was wiped away quickly. Her attitude pretty much screams bad intentions for Coalback. Seeing as how the only thing he has "done wrong" is not being a pony the way she, and by extention the rest of ponykind (aside from Rainbow Dash), have treated him labels them ANTAGONIST in giant neon letters. Even if there is a good reason for it we don't know, the way they're going about it just makes them look bad.
Who is who between the tundra Wolves and The Wolves I can't figure out what is talked about there.
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there is only one type of wolf being talked about, the OTHERS are Discord’s spawn
Aaaaaand now it comes out. Celestia and Luna do, in fact, hate him simply for not being a pony. Sure his ancestors slaughtered alicorns, that's totally a perfect reason to prosecute someone who had nothing to do with the event himself. Nevermind the "offenses" commited by him (breaking out, healing RD, the injured guard) were entirely justified, manipulate him and bind him to your will. Are you SURE Discord is the villain of the story? Because with C & L having admitted they've been diliberately mistreating Coalback because of something that happened long ago, they're looking awfully villainous.
Aaaaand once more Coalback proves himself morally superior to the ponies pulling his leash. Guven that guard went into that duel with leaving Coalback in a similar condition, he doesn't have the right to complain, especially since he doesn't have to be punished for it due to being a pony. Oh, are C&L going to crucify him as well now for being a "monster"? I hope they do, it would be delicious to have the pettiness of thier grudge out for everyone to see.
very good
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! moar
ive been waiting for that song to be used and so well i applaud you good sir
Oh oh oh, is he going to be prosecuted for this as well? If saving one element is a "crime", saving all six is quite reprehensible. *sarcasm*
But in all seriousness, given current status quo I wouldn't be surprised if this is thrown back in his face.
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5310238 I agree
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Brilliant story thus far, very underappreciated. I finally got back to this after letting it stew in my read later for months, and I read from start to finish in a few hours.
My only complaint is that the chapters could be a little bit longer, even if that takes more time, it'd be better because I'm noticing a lack of explaining things, unless I'm just missing them (example being that I don't remember you specifying what somber looked like before the ritual, but, again, maybe I ended up missing something)
Everything else is fairly spot on.
Hell yeah it was enjoyable, instantly started reading once i saw it was updated
yay more of the good wolfie.
Wait, so now Luna is trying to "save" him? When her previous actions have basically amounted to a malicious show of dominance? I hope this turn gets explained.
Racist celestia.
I luvz dat song
Racist luna
Racist princesses
Not racist werewolf
I know it might take you a while and things to do more chapters and I don't want to pressure you into posting it early but I do have to say this,
MOAR PLEASE
6130757 Chapters ARE in the making! Just takes awhile for me to get to them: college preparations, moving into a new house, getting new car registered, etc ad inf.
6131920 Okie It's good to know that not only do you have more chapters but you AREN'T neglecting your life as well
Are we supposed to not to understand what their saying or you want us to look it up? Cause I'm a lazy ass who won't look it up
6205949 Don't worry, it's gibberish. Not meant to really be understood but to take place of a language that can't be understood. Although if it were somehow translated I did actually make an effort to write some dialog through a language generator I found. But without knowing the sounds I put in for it I couldn't tell you what they were saying either :P
...okay i gotta read this to find out why the title
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*Later*
still not getting it....
6225210 The theme for this entire story is supposed to be contrasting elements. And I try to name things based off that rather than what's in the story. Nitroglycerin is extremely unstable and ice is very stable. Things are stabalizing with an impending explosion lurking nearby. It's a sort of uncertain balance that the story is reaching.
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ahh thanks for the info
Did you use google translate for the Deutsche? Because there are some... grammatical errors. But I otherwise love this and wish to see more as soon as authorly possible.
6273596 I used Google for the most part, my Deutsch is pretty mediocre at best. Sorry to dissapoint there.
6276385 Nah, don't worry about it. No harm done!
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my dad hears that song all the tine in the car (can we also take manhattan?)
6276385 I just started this and I am on chapter 4 so far I don't know if I like this story or hate it. I am going to give it a couple more chapters before decide.