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ShouldNotExist


I enjoy world building, and for some ungodly reason, here I am!

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During a visit to Manehattan with her friends, Twilight runs into a strange new pony, literally. While he seems normal enough at first, his attempts at recompense turn into a strange series of discoveries. A musical talent unlike any that she has seen. Old magic, older than Celestia herself. And a past that follows in this new stallion's shadow, waiting for his guard to drop.

Marty, an eccentric musician stricken with blindness from a young age, is not all he appears to be. He might not be able to see, but the things he knows go far beyond what any pony should. And he should never have come back out of hiding. From the very moment he meets Twilight Sparkle both their lives are put in great peril. Something else walks just outside their perception, acting to pull Marty back into their clutches and take the Elements of Harmony out of the equation once and for all. The Elements' only defense may be trusting the blind-pony, who even from the beginning could have secret motives as well. But in the end, the price for freedom will be extreme.








This will be written to the side of another story I am already far into, so it won't be updated often ... unless I decide to take a longer break from that one. It will also act as a place for me to practice different types of writing. Like writing songs into a story, and strange forms of dialog. So later chapters will probably be much better than earlier ones. I will also, more than likely, add tags as I write this. And I think I've just plain given up on remaining canon, it's not awesome enough for me and to do that I would have to drop the weight I want the story to carry for Twilight ... Also, decided that (almost) all chapters shall be named after song titles now!

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 24 )

oh god cherry is so HGNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN cute.P.S FIRST

Oh it's his mom! o:

Band of changelings, what a fun and unique concept!

2734246 not sure if serious, or sarcasm ...

2734347 Absolutely not sarcasm at all, I was actually saying what was on my mind.

Holy hell just found this. Read ALL of it in one sitting. And no update for two weeks since last comment? Dam you be busy bro. Still amazing story though! :)

2809704 next chapter is almost done, stay tuned kiddies!

Uh oh. Rarity's playing matchmaker again! This should be interesting......... *rubs hands together maniacly* hahahahaha......

ok, description got my attention *adds to read later*

Those three crusaders always causing trouble ha!

But but that cliffhanger!

Of all the songs he could have sang to twilight, why would he pick imagine faggots?

I would have picked something like pearl jam or chili peppers.

I love the idea of the magic that Marty uses. I only hope that the lessons with Twilight will go over good.

Not to mention the two ponies including one more working for mistress trying to make him to come back.

Needless to say, I'm excited to see what happens next.

Oh dang, plot thickens! I love how you put in various concepts of magic that twisted Twilight's head around haha.

This chapter is amazing; definitely big hit that I didn't see coming with those guards and Shining Armor and Iron showing up arresting him for violating the parole and reveals that Marty is indeed one of those magic users.

And he have killed ponies before but as you have showed so far in this story that he have changed- to what extent I don't know yet. He actually outright warned Twilight about the dangers of magicks that she's trying to learn about.

I look forward to that duel between Shining Armor and Marty.

(update sooner :D)

-Morfonious

Ha! This should be fun!

Awesome duel! This is!

When will this update? I'm anxious for next chapter!

Are you going to keep this story going??:rainbowhuh::raritydespair:

Hey just wondering if your ever going to update? :twilightsmile:

8059068 I've been tip tapping a little, I promise. But, honestly, I'm a college student whose grades are failing. My time for writing, and the drive to do it, are very limited. Who would have guessed an Electrical Engineering major would be hard? But it's not abandoned, just glacially slow going.

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Ok! Thank you for letting me know, take your time and focus on your grades. Just try your hardest and I'm sure you will be fine! Don't worry about the new chapter, I can surely wait focusing on collage is way more important. :twilightsmile:

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Oh good! I dont want to see this story dead, rather completed :)

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