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Formerly Lost Time Series
Book descriptions past book one will contain spoilers, so be warned.

1: Memories of a Lost Time
Streak was only sixteen when Discord betrayed his fellow immortals and tried to take over the world. He joined the army, where he quickly rose in the ranks, eventually becoming the general of the United Equestrian Armies. He had led his troops to victory, becoming the most respected pony in Equestria. That all changed when he was betrayed by his closest allies. He was wiped from the history books and the war he spent five years fighting was erased from memory.

One thousand years later, he pulls himself out of a realm of nothingness called the Void to find the world he worked so hard to help create has fallen completely under the control of one of his former allies. Now on top of being forced to deal with distrust to and from new allies, worry about betrayal again, and being faced with the fact that even he's not immune to love, he also has to deal with an embarrassing new phobia. Whatever it takes to kill the one who betrayed him.

But how will Streak prevail, and even if he does, will he fall deeper and deeper into his darkness, becoming the very monster he seeks to destroy? Only time will tell, but one thing is certain.

Streak will have his revenge.

2: Flight From Memories
Formerly Vengeance From a Lost Time
Celestia had been exposed and stripped of her power. Due to a clever use of Cadance’s spellcraft, every pony, griffon, and minotaur in every city in Equestria knew Celestia for the monster she was. Streak had won. He even managed to survive winning, despite his fears otherwise.

Or so he thought. He left Celestia’s ultimate fate up to the Bearers, which proved to be a fatal mistake. Celestia was spared, given a second chance as a magic-less version of herself, and within days sent an assassin after him, who was successful at slaying the former general. With his consciousness back in the Void, this time as an insider instead of an intruder, Streak learned how to harness his new demon form.

Unknown to him, his death caused a rift in the Bearers. His body was never found, since technically it was not really there in the first place, which led Rainbow Dash to convince herself that he was only missing. She grew resentful as the other bearers, one by one, stopped looking for Streak. When Twilight gave up the search, it was the final straw. Rainbow started an argument that wiped any trace of their friendship from all their thoughts and actions, going so far as to threaten Twilight were she to ever talk to her again.

After two years of animosity, Rarity had had enough. She brought the two of them together to try and rekindle their friendship. This proved to be a horrible decision, ending with Rainbow Dash in jail awaiting trial for attempted murder and Twilight in the hospital. All the while, Celestia was continuing her vile deeds behind everyone’s back. Coupled with the neighboring Griffon Empire closing their borders, to ponies only, without so much as a word as to why, lends itself to a tumultuous landscape for Streak’s return. A return facilitated by one of the the most unlikely sources.

3: Recurring Memories
Starswirl has returned to Equestria, somehow. On top of this, Changelings have moved in and are attempting to do. . . something. Nopony is sure what. To make Streak's life even harder, his daughter doesn't want him to go running through the countryside looking for either party, instead choosing to remain in Ponyville and attempt a normal life.

How will Streak cope with being a civilian now? No more fighting, no more killing, just sitting in town and having a job somewhere normal. Can he even get a job after losing his cutie mark when he transformed into a demon, or is he doomed to joblessness?

On top of this, Twilight is sure to not be happy with the duo, Rarity will have some kind of issues after being held prisoner by changelings, and Star is starting to feel funny around Sweetie Belle. As if his life wasn't hard enough, he starts feeling an urge he hasn't felt in a thousand years. He wants to hurt something, bad.

All in a day's work for Equestria's only remaining professional soldier, right?

4: In His Memory
Streak is dead. He died with a part of the city of Manehattan, but his sacrifice saved the rest of the doomed city.

He left behind Star, however, and she isn't happy that he's gone. Doubly so since Starswirl is the one responsible. Armed with a secret and versatile form of magic used only by the royal guard's War Mages, she sets off to indiscriminately slaughter those responsible for the Manehattan Incident, starting with Starswirl. But has she bit off more than she can chew? How can anyone hope to defeat the former Bearer of Magic in his own element?

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Comments ( 117 )

this was good and it shows promise. consider it tracked:twilightsmile:

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

Already like tracked and eagerly waiting for next chapter :pinkiehappy:

The plot is just so interesting. I mean its from a perspective from a person who was actualy there in the past and could explain things
more clearly.

wow I know celestia is evil in this story but streak and her were in love and she did that stuff to him what next did she cheat on him with starswirl I hope because that is evil and cruel.

SWEET LUNA this celestia is one the most evil celestia out there.

A guardian turned
and everyone burned
forever with hate
that only her death would sate
And now I want more
with the next chapter, you'll soar
for now I must wait
for more of Streak the Great:twilightsmile:
-Eclipse:moustache:

Just wondering were the hell is luna in all this is allways in her room or or celestia did something to her something evil like killed her,or mutilated her or voided her like she to streak oh god if she did that that is beyond evil for sakes she is her sister dame you celestia dame you to the void.............oops um got a little carried away there but luna is my fave pony imagining that happen to her I just..."shutters at celestia's eivl-ness ".

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You. Just... you. :pinkiehappy:

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Thanks!

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I'm currently writing chapter eight. Chapter seven will be out next weekend after further review and editing.

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Luna's absence and forgetfulness about Celestia's crimes shall be addressed later, but nothing that drastic. All episodes through (but not including) Magic Duel are cannon, which includes both Luna's appearances in s1 and s2. She's around.

I'm really that unique?:pinkiehappy:
my day has reached its peak!
So another chapter soon
you're fans will be over the moon!
First time I've gotten a call out
Now I feel the need to shout:yay:
Don't be too late
with the next update
So for now I'll sign off
with a gentlemanly hat doff
-Eclipse:moustache:

just kill the bitch :ajbemused: and have streak hunt down the rest of his mates

3140845 Kill her horribly because she deserves no mercy for her crimes but make killing public do not let luna interfere with it she is to weak and soft (in this fic) to see her sister killed she let her free fool she is(in this fic)or she might what vengeance for what celestia did to her and everyone one she wronged FOR JUSTICE DEMAND'S IT SO TO THE SOULS OF THE SLAYED FOR THAY BURN FOR REVEGNGE FOR THE CRIMES SHE COMMITTED ON THEM ?HAWHOO

Well that escalated fast? (oh FIRST)P.S did thay kill celestia or did thay pussy out of it and not kill her if so please at least have her horn and wings(and maybe her eyes as well) cut,sawed or ripped off painfully and lock her in a deep dark hole,pit or dungeon with litte to no food and water or just void her as long as she suffers because I really hate (this fic's)celestia?

End of book one:fluttercry:
End of an arc of fun:raritydespair:
So with this end, a new beginning to come
So bring us more cool, 20% and then some
So Streak's a demon, part of the mass
this will come back, to bite them all in the ass?
So now, for book two, I wait
for your updates, my hunger to sate.
-Eclipse:moustache:

Damn this is one good chapter.:pinkiehappy: Now the wait begins anew for the next chapter.

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Should be up next weekend unless I'm feeling nice. So, next weekend :trollestia:

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And to think that all of that was just spur of the moment. I've had to do a ton of revision to make the story keep working, but I think it's worth it.

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I hope not, that means that the cops will ask a ton of questions that I don't want to answer.

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This is why I write. To know that someone enjoyed my writing. :yay:

Really were is luna I hope something good like beating the sh*t out celestia or is in hideing for her?......oh and P.S FIRST?

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:rainbowhuh: Still haven't answered this dude's question, HB!
:pinkiesad2: M-Maybe next chapter?
:trollestia: Yeah, sure, Pinkie. Next chapter.

... Almost spoiled the beginning of next chapter. See what I had typed is

:trollestia: █████████ You mad bro?

and that would have ruined the whole next chapter. Ah well.

I hope celestia with get hers painfully and slow and long death wait no death is to good for her:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy: something worse much worse HEHEHHHAHHAAAAAAHA BLOOD AND VENGENCE?

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That just made my day, you have no idea. :pinkiehappy:

Does Steaks comment about how he found somepony to replace Celestia mean that Streak will end up with Rainbow Dash?

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I'm leaning that way for now, but the way things are right now, there are going to be six books, so anything is up for grabs. :rainbowwild: :pinkiehappy: :raritywink: :ajsmug: :yay: :twilightsheepish:

No, Rarity, not you.
:raritycry: :raritydespair:

An evil ass raised the best
and shall go down 6 feet at Streaks behest
Another update as awesome as the rest
Scoots is the kid, right? No jest?
So I wait for the next part of the saga
and remember that Streak is more awesome than a Naga (see here)
So i wait again
I hope with my wren
to see streak be badass again
-Eclipse:moustache:

There will be blood.

i thought dash's kid was star

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You continue to amaze me. :pinkiehappy:

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Much blood. Much. :eeyup:

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Thank you for this, I'll use it later. :rainbowkiss:
Also:
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There are many ponies it could be. It could very well be Scoot, hell, I could even have it be Diamond Tiara. That's the fun part about having an adopted kid. You can change cannon without changing it. Nowhere does it say DT isn't adopted. :pinkiecrazy:
















I wouldn't do that, though. I hate DT :trollestia:

Me reading this chapter :applejackunsure::rainbowlaugh::rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::twilightoops::derpyderp2:

That sunuva bi-
He stole all his kills!!!
Time to go dogtag hunting.

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:pinkiehappy:

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Me writing this chapter:
:raritycry: I have to get something written, but I don't know what!
:raritydespair: Whatever shall I do!
:rainbowlaugh: That's a great idea!
:facehoof: Actually, that's stupid.
:unsuresweetie: Is this one any better?
:ajsleepy: No.
:pinkiegasp: OHMYGODGREATIDEA!
:pinkiehappy: Now I can finally start writing!
Actually, that describes my writing process in general pretty accurately.

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Originally there was going to be a huge rebellion at the incarceration of what the public saw as their newest hero, starting a rebellion that culminated with another trial. During that trial, Streak was going to kick ass. I decided, instead, to do this. :eeyup:
I think I made the right choice, especially since I have been writing up to the plot line I really want to write. So close! HEHEHEHEHE! :pinkiecrazy:

You sly dog you. Nice plot twist there my friend.:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

You, Ive seen what you have done.
And I like.
BUENO.

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