"Even as they lied to me, Even as I broke- Even as the world crumbled, Even as it died, Even then you searched for me, And tried to reach my side." Twilight Velvet is going to find her daughter. No matter what it takes.
300 years after the War, Spike struggles to find personal happiness at Christmas while wondering if he should bother loving a human he cares about or stay alone forever
Ever wonder who makes sure Happily Ever After stays happy? While after the credits roll and the heroes win the day Cloak and Dagger make sure that things keep rolling smoothly. All while bickering every step of the way.
Not a fan of the "I Am Discord, I am Legend" thing between every paragraph. Makes it feel like a poem, which....I suppose is what you were going for? I think if you just cut those out, it would look a little nicer. But....whatevs. Tells the story. Works fine. To...I don't know....hear something different from Discord's view would have been cool. I just read pretty much everything I already knew about him ;p
Not a fan of the "I Am Discord, I am Legend" thing between every paragraph. Makes it feel like a poem, which....I suppose is what you were going for? I think if you just cut those out, it would look a little nicer. But....whatevs. Tells the story. Works fine. To...I don't know....hear something different from Discord's view would have been cool. I just read pretty much everything I already knew about him ;p
Regardless..../) :))
I like this
holly shit this was amazing!!!
Great story! I love your view of Discord's past!