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Still a monster...but less of a bastard. Wish Superman was real so I could get a hug.
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You're overusing commas. A good percentage of these don't need to be here at all.
You appear to be missing at least one word, maybe more...
beeline - A very direct or quick path or trip.
From bee +‎ line, due to the belief that a bee returns to its hive in a straight course.
I could keep going, but I'd be here all day...
4993582 Thank you for your input, also the reason I let people google is because, I'm not so good at writing descriptions for stuff. I'm much better at writing action scenes.
4993777 Also, he does have a European broadsword, I never said he didn't.
I really hope Drago wins!
4993795 You'll just have to wait and see.
Oh, by the way as a note for people, Drago my sound OP, but don't worry, he can die.
One thing i might say though, it that the way drago talked with everyone, it was kinda cheating out of the conversation. Try to make the conversations and events last a little longer.
4993806 Thanks, I'll try, but I won't promise anything. I think I shine in the action sequences.
4993853 Oh yeah, don't worry his entire arsenal will be revealed.
4993889 Trying to make most of the weapons a surprise, don't want to show exactly what he's capable of yet do I?
4993944 Don't worry I got it.
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I have to agree with 4993972 on this one. Between the dislike/like ratio and the comments, you obviously don't have it.
Pretty good. As much as i want to get the fight over with, my advise to you would to revise the chapters, and take your time, build the suspense, let it go a few more chapters with Drago playing the ponies for fools, and then let the fight start. Also, you said Drago protected innocents, but didn't you say in the story that he went around killing ponies for fun or something?
Oh, also, having two different characters talk in the same paragraph is confusing. You should start a new paragraph when someone new talks.
4998342 Got it. Thanks man. Also, you're right about the ponies thing, but tell the truth, most of the time, they strike first. And in Drago's eyes, you strike him, you go down.
4998721 No Problem
4998721 Unless, it's a misunderstanding that makes sense. But attacking him simply because he looks threatening and not giving him a chance to explain after, yeah.
I think Drago should stop telling everyone all his secrets
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5028122 oh believe me my good sir he hasn't told them anything useful.
5028149 Alright then. But he did say his bitch slaps turn women into his slaves. Will Celestia be on the lookout for that?
5028177 maybe, but there's not a lot someone can do againsta righteous pimp hand. Plus he lied about his sped. he can go much faster than the speed of light.
5028177 plus they still have no idea how good drago is with his weapons, how many he has, or what they can do.
Nice a clone with a double bich slap nice
I thought by Drago you ment the chapter master of the grey knights, Man equstria just dodged a bolter round.
5064588 There's a chapter master called Drago? I had no idea.
5064596 something along those lines i dont pay much attention to the grey knights lore sadly (Blud rehvens where its at) but the names close enough. Pretty bad ass too he's in the warp directly fighting chaos.
5064793 Sounds like Captain Titus from the Space Marine Game for consoles. I like him.
5064830 Meh grey knights lore is lacking because of he who shall not be named, Anyways good story i shall continue to read this and alucards story of fuckin shit up. I GIVE THIS THE EMPRAHS APPORVAL!!!!
5064862 May the Emporer's Will be done.
Im back no coffin can contain me!!! Speaking of the heat season poor solly went through it in an anthro pony universe poor bastard.
Then the universe exploded due to sheer awesomeness then there was Gaben and all is well.
Attention everyone, as of right now I am working on my other fic 'the protectors' however, I will get back to Drago soon. Also, if you read my update, you know that once the small fry have been dealt with, Drago's party of six, will face off against the mane six. So tell me who you want to see go up against each other and I'll make it happen. May the blood flow freely!
5115355 Who is this solly you speak of? I would like to know of him.
5064793 Thousand sons and Emperor's children have some pretty awesome lore.
5139946 BLUD REHVENS AER BETTER!!!! so sayth commander borelae.
5290132 Actually night lords have some great lore too.
5290528 True but for humor value in the grim dark future of the 41st millennium Blud Rehvens!
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5293420 That was the single best thing i have ever seen.
5293957 It truly is.
kill all in your path drago
It's been a while since I've seen a murderous "Drago". I'm surprised this one is interested in Equestria.
7727120 Must be one of the Drago's that lost his sanity in his own universe. And I've seen many of them.
This Drago sounds a lot like me,no trust in anyone,those who I do trust aren't around anymore,and we travel through different universes or dimensions. And we both fought powerful beings and deities. But I only kill when I have to. I wear armor,he wears a jacket. And if I may ask,is he a Draconian like me,or is he another human Drago?