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So the sequel has come at last... fascinating.
Major, major problems with your/you're and their/they're/there.
............ bullshit......
celesti does not need the elements of harmony to fight. the SOLE reason chrysalis won was because chrysalis had absorbed enough love to empower herself....... the problem however is that chrysalis not knowing this also attributed to that. because of that, celestia was not cautiuos in her attack, and chrysalis one inspite of herself then.
this is proof by the fact tiwlight sparkle, a unicorn, overpower chrysalis through magical skill. and she learned those skills from celestia.
aka, this is incredibly contrived and lazy writing. the reason she was not disposed of is purest plot covnenience, and is outright insulting to the characters of the hsow that this character took over equestria.
i mean seriously. celestia could easily have retaken it with only one alicorn helping her. your reasoning lazy and contrived and makes no sense. she can fight without the elements. she has her damn sister to help her. there is NO REASON they have not taken back canterlot other than it would make this story non existent.
5305911 so the crippling contrivence of celestia, who is more powerful than chrysalis and was only beaten by temporary power up, not taking back canterlot with her sister and two other alicorns, which ultimately is far more powerful collectively than discord, because for some reason one of the elements of harmony was there and not with the res........
i lost track of my thought here. the your and you'res are far from the biggest problem with this story. tis plot is non functional and relies on pure plot contrivance.
and i have an answer to the little question up in the description.
complete disregard for the competence of canon characters, plot contrivance, and just simply lazy writing.
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English isn't my first language. It's far from perfect, and I know it really isn't a excuse, but that's that. I will check through this again for errors, with that in mind, however.
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I have a suggestion; write a story that has you're own headcanon in, so that you don't feel the need to have everyone else's conform to your own. While you may have strong feelings about the power of colorful cartoon horses, this whole fic is basicly me tricking people to read my headcanon about changelings disguised in a clop fic, so I'm not going to comment on them.
However, I'm not going to delete you're posts, even though they are inflammatory and rather spamy in nature; I feel they're sufficiently terrible to where there's some humor to be gained from reading them.
5306298 .......... its not headcanon. its freaking logic.
even if celestia was for some reason weak and could not take back canterlot alone, she has three other demigods at her side. this is not headcanon when i say they are collectively more powerful than discord is. they could slice canterlot from the mountain side if they were pushed.
you reasoning for your oc's continued existence is completely illogical. celestia and the other alicorns could easily retake canterlot. heck they could simply take the crystal heart and completely changeling nuke the place while they are at it. the heart does not fuck around with evil. just ask sombra. would need a wigie board to do that though.
or they could replicate shining and cadances shield barrier and shove out all the changelings once more.
This is guy is certainly something. I quite enjoy the Discord demiurge point, as it now comes to mind with me that it's very fitting to his character.
Curious depiction of the changeling views of Discord.
I like it.
Also, it would be interesting if in the time passed Carapace had discovered a way to return Sterling's self-awareness.
Ah, so this is the sequel, well then Moving on.
Your short description has a couple of flaws in it.
What it is right now:
And how it should be:
5306227 if your words were even considered then it would ruin the story
5306298 I love this sequel it is so amazing to see what everyone else is thinking and the headcannons are wonderful
5309743 if the story relies on the alicorns having a collective brain fart on how to deal with one changeling queen, and some really contrived things like celestia being unable to fight, then the stoyr is not functioning from the gate. too much plot convenience, not enough effort.
5309780 so why don't YOU write YOUR OWN story about what YOU think would happen if this were to occur
5309780 one more thing, if ya ain't got nothing nice to say, don't say nothing at all.
P.s. I got that off of Bambi
5309813 logic and sensiblity. those are my criticisms of the story.
5309780 I think you've said enough to get you're point across; in case you have yet to notice, some people don't agree with you, mostly because you're wrong. You're not going to convince anyone you're right, because you're ideas and beliefs are visibly false and are not supported by facts. It's all in you're head, mostly.
Now, I have no issue with you stating your ideas, but I'm perfectly willing to report you for harassment if you continue posting inflammatory comments on this story's comment section.
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5309892 eh, i had long said my peace here dude. they keep on quesitoning and i keep replying.
I myself don't have issues with a changeling taking over Canterlot as much as I have issues with Carapace taking over Canterlot. The first story managed to convince me that her attempt would fall apart the moment she actually had to face any sort of unexpected challenge.
Well, I'm curious, anyway. I'll be tracking this.
Ha, this was pretty funny to read.
Moar?
the last story was great, i wander what happend to thunderlane and cloudkiker
Two years since last update; I recommend marking this as cancelled.