A quiet Monday at Sweet Apple Acres, birds tweeting absent-mindedly, the sun bathing the orchard in it's rays, the residents working the farm. Just another normal day, right?
WRONG!!!!!
The Dark King has arisen from his tomb, his soul goal: destroy the Council of Harmony and the three princesses.
Now, only time will be able to tell if The Council and the Apples can stop this madman before he completes his sinister scheme.
Part of the AppleScratch verse group.
If you wish to write your own AppleScratch story, contact MariacheatBrony.
Chapters (3)
To be honest, I have no idea why your story has such a large dislike to like ratio (Perhaps it's the Romance tag). Even though you are making Sombra slightly op (and I bet there's a good reason behind that), the grammar isn't too bad and the spelling isn't half bad either. (Though you did sort of underplay Celestia and Luna. They are the goddesses of this world and have gotten rid of Sombra before.)
I'm still saving my rating, though. I've just been viewing this story from afar. Also Eponian. Epona. Legend of Zelda refrence, to Link's horse, I believe.
5035719 I didn't create the "Eponian" part. It's part of the canon AppleScratch stories created by MariacheatBrony. Sombra is also OP for a reason, which I will leave you to guess. Also, I do realise I kinda downplayed the princesses' parts but it had to be done in order for the story to progress otherwise it would be over before it began.
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Ah. I'm sorta new to this whole.. Applescratch thing. Apologies. I really only view Sombra fics strictly.
hahaha i know I'm a sad human being5038368 you should read them. They are very good.
Hmmm I'm intrigued by this op-ness of the character...
It definitely won't make it to the canon of Apple Scratch verse, mainly cause my plans for sombra are even more darker than reigning over Canterlot (MOUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA).... but it could be a great story
I don't really see why you get so many dislike and that no one explains it...
The Falcon Punch was a bit too corny for Sombra to do though... I would expect that from Pinkie or Discord... Maybe that's the missing link
5051210 falcon punch was just a small reference I decided to put in. His OP-ness is all part of the scheme
this story...this story has annoyed The Goddamn Batman
5698800 Meh, it was a lost cause anyway, doomed to fail from the start. You can't replicate the style of a masterpiece unless you are the artist him/herself, and I am most certainly not Mariacheatbrony. Though whether or not you are annoyed is irrelevant, because I'm Batmane.
5701260 your comment is illogical, because I am THE GODDAMN BATMAN, good day
5701264 I'M THE GODDAMN BATMANE
5701268 clever, this is a contest that will have no end, you protect Equestria and ill protect Gotham, feel free to visit Gotham anytime, just don't do the wrong thing.
5701274 Well, if it's any consolation, I haven't tackled a DA-turned-psychopath of a tower or beat a man who needed a breathing apparatus yet, so there'll be no issues with killing people. Feel free to visit Equestria, too.
5701281 I have a portal to Equestria, so I shall
5701285 Excellent! The justice-inducing-billionaire-potential-sociopaths have been doubled!
5701291 indeed