It has been 12 years since Tirek was defeated, and all of my friends have gone their separate ways. Applejack still runs Sweet Apple Acres, although now she runs it alone. Rarity now lives in Manehattan and owns one of the most prestigious boutiques in Equestria. Pinkie has roamed the land with Cheese Sandwich spreading their knowledge of partying to all of the world. Twilight is still lives in her palace in Ponyville, but rarely ever leaves.
Fluttershy died a few years ago.
I've even moved on with my life and joined the Wonderbolts after all this time. Life is going great... or at least so I thought.
There is a new evil threatening the land, and it is our job to stop it.
But this is an evil that even we could never have expected. This is an evil I could never hope to defeat.
FINISH IT! The cliffhanger was great, and it had nice work out in aside from grammar errors
4936349 don't worry I will...and my editor is being an arse and not answering me so some errors are expected
4937739 Still waiting for Replica
Couple of small spelling errors here and there, but I'm intrigued.
More! This an amazing premise. And you know how some people say stuff like, 'just my luck, dream come true writer, horrible premise?', well here's what I have to say.
Dream come true writer, dream come true premise.