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River Road

Writing Comedy, Adventure and Slice Of Life. Desperately trying to keep up with all the crazy stories my brain comes up with.


The magic of friendship that went out from Twilight's castle passed through all of Equestria. and also reached six particular friends of them. And what's keeping a good friend from visiting.

Cover art once again by the great Nightmare Nyy.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 47 )

This was very nice! I started looking forward to all the new entrances, once I saw what you were doing!

No comment on this yet? I get to be the first!! :pinkiehappy:

Just wanna say that this was a pretty nice story. Also, how did Scorpan get to Ponyville?


I'm sure that I don't have the slightest idea what you mean. :scootangel:


Why, thank you. Just what I was hoping to accomplish. :raritywink:


Discord brought him there, of course. I mean, it's not like there would be some foreshadowing going on or something.
An important and lifechanging event in the episode just after the last season's finale? What a silly thought. :trollestia:


I live to serve, my dear Nyx.
And to write duets between Celestia and Discord.
...Mainly the latter. :twilightsheepish:

Nice I liked the song remix although I couldnt exactly hear it but I still liked it nonetheless.:pinkiehappy:

“Would you like some more tea, Mr. Scorpan?”

Well, HELLO! :pinkiegasp::rainbowlaugh:

Eek, I really liked this! It was a great epilogue to the finale! :heart:
And if only I could do the thing with the art and the drawing -- I would happily illustrate this fic for you. :scootangel:


A short story without some kind of :twistnerd:?
What do you take me for? :ajsmug:


I can't do the thing with the art and the drawing, either. Still, it's the thought that counts. :heart:


Who knows, if I find some more time I might link the parts of the song to their exact counterparts. Either way, I'm glad to hear that and thank you for your comment. :twilightsmile:

4398735 that would be pretty cool.

Wow, such a great story. The story also reminds me of the rainbow going past by the characters that gave their keys to the Mane 6 during the Season 4 finale.


That's what inspired this story in the first place. :pinkiesmile:
If you look at the cover picture you'll see that, too. I requested a friend to make it just for this story.

Who's Mr.Scorpan? Or is he an oc?:rainbowhuh: CHEESE.SANDWICH.IS.ORANGGGGE!!!:flutterrage::twilightangry2:



But he's wearing a yellow shirt, at least. :scootangel:

And Scorpan is Tirek's brother, so just as much shame on you for not knowing that. :trollestia:


Should I take it that you enjoyed the story, then? :ajsmug:


It happens. I'll admit that there are far too few Scorpan stories. :eeyup:

Well, this was completely different from what I was expecting. I was more hoping to see Cheese, Seabreeze, Silver, Coco and Spitfire (and maybe other Wonderbolts) would meet up with Discord or something like that. But this was rather nice as well. :yay:


With over a dozen characters, you can't really follow a plot. That's hard enough with six of them. Besides, I have too many other projects to make a longer story out of this.

Also, singing ponies. :twilightsheepish:

“Oh right, Pinkie already is throwing a party today. You guys should totally stay for that. She said it’s going to be a CheesePie party.”

So, this is a named thing now, is it? :trixieshiftright: Thanks for the heads-up! :rainbowlaugh::pinkiesmile:


I'm sure Pinkie and Cheese don't know what other meanings CheesePie could have. :twilightsheepish:

Rainbow Dash must be ecstatic, visited by the main 3 Wondrbolts whom she idolizes, Captain of the Wonderbolts Reserve, passed both theory and practice with ease and going to a party planned by th two greatest party planning ponies Pinkie and Cheese. Wonder what Cheese's cutie mark is supposed to be? maybe it's vaguely supposed to represent him being good at making people laugh by doing wierd stuff? Like a cheese sandwich that looks like an accordion, his cutie mark.

Discord singing? :pinkiegasp: Plus Thw Wonderbolts singing And So many awesome songs! :*explodes Fromm awesome overload*


I think it's partially because he found his way from Pinkie Pie and her cheese sandwich. That, and obviously it's a nod to his voice actor. :pinkiesmile:


Hehehe, I'm glad you liked it. And if you did, I just started writing on a Tavi-Scratch story with six new songs. :raritywink:

Must fav it stood the test of time for me and it is still a good read and still is one of the better short fics I read. I give it 5 out of 5 smiles:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:


Why, thank you very much. :raritywink:
Anything you enjoyed in particular?

Hard to stay but over all the music part set it in for me to fav it but the first part you did a great job writing and I loved the part with coco and silver shill but the songs definitely set it in for a fav.


If you liked the songs, you should watch out for another story I'm writing. It'll have Vinyl and Octavia singing karaoke. :trollestia:

It's very fast-paced, and the scene-setting is enjoyable. Nice little follow-up, though I'm not familiar enough with the songs to be able to follow them. Like, at all. Late arrival, you know how it goes. :scootangel:


Hey now, aren't you the guy who watched the episodes with all those songs literally just today? Or at least this week, when you caught up with the season? Shame on you. :trixieshiftright:

Maybe I should try linking them directly, with the appropriate moment in the song right there... :unsuresweetie:

Eh, maybe later. :eeyup:

Who, moi? Really now, if anything that means I haven't had time to let them all sink in yet. I caught the pet finding song, sure. The rest is a bit muddled. You have to know the songs and be able to mimick the rhythm and tone, at least.

And it's not my fault confidence issues got in the way of watching a Season with nearly half of its episodes dedicated to confidence issues.

Umm... :twilightblush: point taken.

Here's a funny thing about "Let the Rainbow Remind You" - I did not care for it much the first time I heard it. After a short while, I decided to listen to it again to figure out why I didn't care for it. Instead of finding out why I didn't like it at first, I realized that the more I listened to that song, the more it grew to my liking...

Anyway, if you would like my verdict regarding this story, let me simply say that I found it to be:


Thanks for writing! :twilightsmile: :yay: :pinkiehappy: :ajsmug: :rainbowkiss: :raritywink:


Now that there's a big and fancy amazin' :applejackconfused:

Thank you for the praise, these comments always make my day. :heart:

This was the BEST. FIC. EVERR!


Hehehe, should I assume you enjoyed it, then? :raritywink:

Also, nice to see that someone still remembers who Scorpan was. :derpytongue2:

5043944 I know right?

This is a cute idea, but since I didn't immediately remember the songs, the second chapter fell a bit flat for me.

Still amusing and good fun.

This. Is. Awesome!! :pinkiehappy: After reading this, this story just made me so happy inside... :rainbowkiss:


D'awww, thank you. :heart:

And thank you for faving this story twice. I didn't even realize you could do that. :raritystarry:

P.S.: If the singing part was what you are particularly fond of, I have another story with lots of singing ponies in work. Kinda. I'm lazy, okay?

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