Many years ago there was a stallion and mare who were madly in love. They decided to move into a home together. After a few years they decided to get married and gave birth to a young colt named Scoots. But what they didn't know was that the mare had a secret admirer through all the years. The admirer got more and more disgusted of their relationship. He wanted it to end but it didn't. The story begins with the colt "Scoots" being born. After some time as he came of age the colt would be able to talk The admire grew restless and could no longer stand idly by as the mare he loved was taken from him...
Chapters (5)
Scootaloo?
Scoots?
Are these two different individuals?
6446250 yes completely different just named close to the same. scoots is a colt/stallion to be. I did not put scootaloo in the character list to try and show that. Thank you for asking it helps clarify for everyone.
6446279 Ah, I was about to complain about incorrect usage of colt, as Scootaloo is female. Thus it would be filly (but then again who the actual hell cares aside from me)
6446285 A lot more people then you might think. Anyway sorry for the confusion other then that I really hope you enjoyed the story.
I really hope the story does well and doesn't just get a bunch of thumbs down cause a few grammatical errors near the end. That is why its marked incomplete. Also because some people come by just to hit unlike at the beginning when they haven't given the whole story a chance in the end. I know that happens a lot and it stinks for the story teller. Just sit back to try and enjoy it. (reason I put this is i gained both my dislikes 30 mins after my last view gain so it got dislikes without the views for them showing it was disliked without even being looked at)
anyone wishing to put some constructive criticism go ahead. But that means constructive criticism not just hate.