Spike's Treasure

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Safhell

Safhell #1 · Jul 23rd, 2014 · · ·

Nice you just made a story w/ all the grim dark characters good job

AnonymousZero

AnonymousZero #2 · Jul 23rd, 2014 · · ·

It's alright but I would like prequels of eveypony that got murdered first.

JBGrim

JBGrim #3 · Jul 28th, 2014 · · ·

This is messed up, not for the poor torture sequence, but for the poor story development. Its just rushed, garbled and feels like you were trying to stay within a certain word range. Perhaps more description, expand on some some of the characters thoughts, a better torture scene, build up and drop the 'everyone's a killer bit' this would work a LOT better. Still, it's not the worst I've seen and Spikes need to protect his hoard falls in character with dragons, and Blue blood was a dick. Also I loved how dragons can turn victims to gems, it explains why they would hunt other beings.

beirirangu

beirirangu #4 · Aug 10th, 2014 · 1 · ·

I liked the idea of it and the ideas within it that were your own (yes, I didn't like the tie in with the other horror/creepypasta stories) because it could've easily been the case that whatever enters his cave becomes a part of his hoard and he's allowed to do whatever he wants with it; letting them go or kill them in whatever way he wants, even saying that Celestia agreed with that and trusts his judgement (though maybe setting up a version of a camera to make sure he isn't killing innocent ponies or whatnot) ... and I did like the Chrysalis thing (of course) and I'd love to read more about that (particularly how they got together)

salmoncolor

salmoncolor #5 · Sep 13th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Rainbow Factory, Cupcakes, Shed.MOV, Apples.MOV, Little MIss Rarity, I don't reconize Twilight.

Thunderbird Resurrection

Thunderbird Resurrection #6 · Sep 28th, 2014 · 1 · ·

Couldn't we have had Bluebloods Testicles ripped off forcefully with duck take and hot glue?

Snowy Flanks

Snowy Flanks #7 · Feb 3rd, 2015 · · ·

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I believe it is 'The Experiments of Twilight Sparkle'

salmoncolor

salmoncolor #8 · Feb 4th, 2015 · 1 · ·

5583780 Thanks.

salmoncolor

salmoncolor #9 · Feb 4th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Reread this, and it is pretty good. Neat. (Wait, what? Gore and all, and I said `Neat`? )

No, really, I love it.

PitchParade

PitchParade #10 · Feb 9th, 2015 · 2 · ·

it was dark, blueblood was tortured to death, thats all i care about. i am pleased.

SpikeThePredator

SpikeThePredator #11 · Apr 12th, 2015 · · ·

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That would've been better, or, what if spike ripped off blue bloods head, then ripped out his entire Skelton (slowly) and then went inside his skin, walked to pinkimena place, made his skin into cupcakes, and ate it while cthulu rubbed spikes cock!!

SpikeThePredator