Equestria is dead. Using massive weapons of utter destruction, the Caribou have killed all but a handful of ponies, including Princess Twilight. But leaving the Princess of Magic alive was folly. After all, love conquers all. Even death.
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Oh my gosh guys I'm first! Love me! Give me attention!
Ah Disturbed! I like their music! Anyway great chapter!
And FIRST
I'm really excited for the rest of the battle. This story is like stress relief. It's so satisfying to see the caribou being brutally massacred.
Meh. I'm sadistic .
short but interesting chapter. ^_^ keep up the good work.
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I really hope this is a parody of the typical "first comment"cause of it's not... Welcome to the internet
No. It is never enough! Moar pls.
Wow, go Sweetie! She is one sexy powerful scary mare.
i'd want longer chapters if they weren't coming down like rain.
Huh, didn't see this when I checked my updates. Maybe it was because it updated earlier today? No matter. Go Sweetie! The Caribou deserve to suffer for what they've done, any jury on our Earth would easily convict them of war crimes!
Note to self: DO NOT piss off sweetie belle, or my head might explode as if a sniper round hit it due to her skills with harmonics.
4970097 Speakin' for myself, I'm lovin' 'em! Keep up the rad work, hon; you're doin' great!
And that is cool to know. I love your ToaNE-Verse, and I look forward eagerly to each new chapter-update!
(And two updates in one day today (Sept. 7th); huzzah! I'm loving that!)
4970777 Amen brother to that!
4970596 we're all a little sadistic
Sweetie Belle, proof that sadness can kill.
Holy shit! Sweetie Belle saying lyrics from Disturbed's "Enough?" You sir/madam made my night. Thank you.
~ Super-Brony12
Wow, Sweetie Belle is awesome. Another great update.
We don't want them, we want everything.
And we taught them, to want everything.
Can't wait for the next chapter:(
And for the Moment when Luna and Celestia will awake from their 'slumber' (They're not dead as far as we know).
I realize it's part of the point since the original fic is nothing more but horrible fetish fuel written by a rather twisted soul...
But I have to admit, this story is slowly but surly moving beyond a cathartic and well earned ass-kicking, into a species-wide snuff reel.
And I don't think I wan't to read that story.
Honestly, if even a single caribou threw down their weapons in terror would the ponies actually humor that surrender? Because this chapter got within a inch of Sweetie Belle of all darn ponies killing a whole room one limb at a time.
I realize she's been through a metric fuck-ton of crap, but I honestly lost a lot of respect for Sweetie (and by extension the ponies) in this chapter.
So, I'm just going to come out and ask it straight: Will there be more torture of what frankly by that point was (literately and figuratively) disarmed cripples performed by the good-guys? Because this chapter left me with a really bad taste in my mouth, and I wan't to know if I should just unfavorite right now.
I approve this taste in death by music.
I don't know what it is but I don't feel like there is enough gore...
There is a couple posts I have to agree with.
it has been 20 years, so many of the army that did attack Equestria is either retired or promoted so high that they haven't gotten to them yet. the common soldiers are the next generation, that wasn't even born when the ponies were wiped out. if you want to punish them, then go after the ones that did it. at least offer the younger ones a chance to surrender, or a quick death, if they don't.
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I'm glad you posted that.
No, I don't plan to make this a big snuff reel. I gave that one to Sweetie Belle, because she needed to get it out. She saw more than she lets on; she saw her big sister violently tortured and raped, then murdered. She has had a massive amount of hate building in her soul, and there was a good deal of regret for what she just did. That will be covered later, either in this main story, or one of the sides.
There is one more big scene of mass slaughter. I will let you know that right now. However, none will be as gory as this scene was. But the ponies need to get this revenge out of their system, or it would come back in other ways, that won't nearly be as... justified.
I love that Sweetie's special talent is harmonics. An intelligent writer can do quite a lot with it, and you seem like an intelligent writer. I continue to enjoy the story. I also appreciate the short chapter sizes, but wouldn't complain if they got longer, either.
4971676 Yeah, their parents were the ones that killed all of those innocent ponies, but they are the ones who continued the practice of rape and murder. In killing the children of the ones who did the crime, they are making sure it will never happen again. They are not trying to win this war, they are are going to make sure they will never need to fight a war like this again. It's what I would so in this situation.
I like justice. But for me, it is part of justice that one should be better than the other. This is starting to go a little overboard and the Ponys are starting to go down to the same level as the enemy. Hm, we'll see how this goes.
I always liked Disturbed's first album over the others. Haven't listened to them as much recently. Tool, Drowning Pool, and Static-X have been taking up more of my listening time.
Disturbed is my favorite.
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There's quite a difference between 'letting it out' and 'torturing people she could have just as easily claimed as prisoners of war.'
It's the torture I'm against, not that the whole barrack died.
Still, as long as there are consequences for it, I guess I can keep reading for now.
4970664 It's supposed to be
Lest anyone forget, "All's fair in love and war, you know." Frank Smedley.
the ponies are just showing the caribou the cruelties they(the ponies) were forced to endure. so i believe all has been justified.
just. . . don't . . don't let the ponies go overboard with revenge. as in, like, kill every single caribou. That is to much. just instill a lot of fear in the caribou survivors of the unholy war.
but until that point is reached,
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cuz it'll only get better from here
cue insane laughter. the best insane laughs are at 2:17 & 4:18, funniest(most amusing) are at 4:50 & 5:20
Hopefully this doesn't presage worse acts on the part of ponies. Of course, it could be that her own actions horrified her, as justified as they might have been/she felt they might have been. Running away in tears, although at least in part because of the memories brought up, isn't normally a sign that somepony's satisfied with their decisions. Whatever she chooses to do, what Scootaloo says is going to have a big impact in that choice. It is good to know that this part of the simultaneous battles is going smoothly, though.
It looks like Granny Smith got the cleanest, least spiteful death out of anyone in this entire story. RIP you wonderful, insane mare.
Where is big mac or has he not entered the story yet?
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Hell, I'm new to this story, and even I know that it said he was helping Applejack in Ponyville!