Equestria is dead. Using massive weapons of utter destruction, the Caribou have killed all but a handful of ponies, including Princess Twilight. But leaving the Princess of Magic alive was folly. After all, love conquers all. Even death.
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ah, so that answers that question. here's a new one: did you have that whole Eris scene planned out from the beginning, or did you just come up with it?
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I always knew Discord's role. Eris was something I came up with a few days ago, that helped me solve a dilemma.
Hooray, Celestia and Luna are back, baby! Glad to see the Caribou be routed from Equestria and have their capital destroyed! What happened to Discord, er Eris?
wellp..gg Caribou now uv got 4 extremely pissed off immortal god tier beings against you. We here in Equestria would like to extend our hooves and say we hoped you enjoyed your stay ion our lands now please enjoy our parting gift :D... oh who am i kidding stand stil so i can cut u down like the beasts you are
Wow, what a chapter!
Twilight and her army take out the Caribou in Fillydelphia (I believe), Celestia and Luna are free, so are the slaves where they are, Discord is now Eris (!?), they have the Elements back, and Twilight and her army know their beloved Princesses are now free and headed home. All-in-all, a great chapter! Well, done!
Can't help but wonder what's gonna happen when Celestia and Luna find out what Twilight did to make the ponies of Equestria alive again. (Hopefully, they'll understand why she did what she did, and won't be mad at her for it all.)
Somehow, I don't think that they will be, but that's just me.
And this roller-coaster ride ain't over yet? I have only one word for that:
Good.
Can't wait to see what happens next! Bring it on!!!
They will burn...
Oh wow, for the first time in 20 years Twilight is (probably) truly happy again. Oh, I want to see the reunion, it'd be so sweet.
4974668 sweet. i've always like the idea of Eris better than Discord. not quite sure why.
4974754 Five. Trixie(who recently became an Alicorn), Eris, Celestia, Luna, and Twilight. And Cadence might be making a 6th here.
4974833 oh i forgot abou trixie i wonder what the Caribou have done to Cadence..if they were able to get past the crytal heart anyway..it was prob explain in a previous chapter..but i read so many stories is hard to remember the fine details in them sometimes xD
Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!
question what does twilight look like the cover or something else? if it is described in story can you tell me what chapter please.
Whoa. No other words can describe epic this chapter was! And the fact that it's still not over yet is even better. Caribou nation, I hope your ready to deal with four, possibly FIVE alicorns (Twilight, Luna, Celestia, Trixie, and Cadence), as well as the entity of chaos itself Disco- I mean Eris. Because after what you have done to Equestria, I don't think there will be anything left of your pathetic excuse for a country. Enjoy your upcoming trip to Tartarus...if you can!
Awesome chapter here and I look forward to the next one.
~ Super-Brony12
For the previous chapter I wanted to comment about Celestia absorbing pony blood, but it seems to have been mostly about Discord making the statue absorb a potion or something.
If things were so easy so far, it means that trouble will brew either in the counterstrike or internally. Will Celestia not approve of Twilight's tactics? Will the griffons give ponies grief?
Good update, though I wonder if Twilight will give up her power or the Sister force Twilight to stay as Empress.
I can think of line, "Our time of rule is over Twilight. Its now time for the new Princess to take the thrown. Rule well."
Though I do wonder if the Carbeuo will do now that most of their forces were destoryed since the heart of their empire fell. I am assuming its the same with Rome. When Rome fell during the time of the Roman Empire, so did the entire Empire. Payback is a bitch and I can think Ponies would not be the only race to pick a bone with them.
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dat spelling
Never Bring a Knife (or in this case, a Battle Axe) to a Gunfight.
This story is good for reasons other than most stories. Its not as literarily sophisticated as many fics. Despite all the fighting, there is no real conflict. The problems encountered are easily dealt with, and that means there is little dramatic tension, especialy considering all the main characters are immortal, in one way or another.
What makes it good is the primal sense of justice that runs throughout. It appeals to us on a level of thinking lower than our daily thoughts. Its a tad animalistic, in that sense. But dang, it feels right. Tapping into that sensation of rightness, especially with how ambiguiously moral our hero's actions are, takes no small amount of skill, despite its simplicity in other aspects. I doesn't seem that you were planning on writing more than a good ol' beat down revenge fic, with a few extra aspects. I congratulate you on another good chapter. I eagerly await the next.
Woohoo! Celestia and Luna are back! I was afraid Celestia might be a bit appalled at what Twilight's done, but given that she and Luna just nuked a city... eh, probably not.
Had a feeling that mare was Discord. :3 Glad to see that unfold.
this is great and all but were is spike?
The Caribou are now faced with 5 near-gods with city-destroying power, and the Wonderbolts provide means to stop the Caribou's thermo-magical bombs. This could become very, very one-sided.
But...
Will Celestia and Luna accept what Twilight has done? Both in bringing the ponies to unlife, and in demolishing the kingdom of Equestria?
Will the undead all be brought back to full life now, with the Elements of Harmony in pony possession again? That will remove one of their greatest advantages in the war--the near-invulnerability of undeath. There could be conflict starting from that, instead--Celestia and Luna accept the different nature of love necromancy, but demand to bring the ponies back to life at once, while Twilight might want to keep them in their state until they defeat the Caribou so that their ponies won't die right after being brought back (I mean, I suppose she could love necromancy them back... but that's a lot of energy and a lot of pain spent on something that could have been avoided).
I wonder how much Eriscord knows about what's been happening back in Equestria. Discord always knows more about what's going on than he really should, and if Eris can tell the Princesses before they reach Canterlot then at least there's less chance of the two acting to wipe out all the undead in their capital.
How... er... sane, are Celestia and Luna? Twenty years is a much shorter period of time for someone who's lived millennia and it doesn't approach Luna's little adventure on the moon, but depending on how metal fused into your flesh hurts after it cools down they could have been in 20 years of constant agony. That could cause issues.
Anyways, my guess is that now that we have Eriscord, Luna, Celestia, Cadance, Twilight, and Trixie all approximately on the same side, internal strife is going to become a bigger issue than wiping out the Caribou (who are, unless they've got some really, really good stuff back in their homeland that we haven't seen yet, hopelessly outmatched).
So you buffed the ponies and gave them multiple armies of living and dead + 4 (5?) Alicorns + 1 draconequus + dragons (assuming Spike is still out there alive and hoarding) ... Exactly how are you going to level the playing field?
Beginning of conflict (the power sway)
Caribou > Ponies (b/c of surprise and ponies not prepared for war)
Caribou =< Ponies (b/c ponies were able to militarize and advance with magic)
Caribou > Ponies (Thermal Magical Bombs + other unpleasant methods)
Caribou < Ponies (Undead ponies, live ponies, Changlings, 4/5 Alicorns, draconequus, crystal ponies, other allies [dragons, zebras, etc.])
Yeah ... the only way Caribou can even be a challenge is if they pull out more hat tricks as devastating as their Thermal Magical Bombs.
Still having a ton of fun with this story, one of the few in the Caribou universe. But this power gap ... abyss is disconcerting.
Best of luck, stay healthy, and update soon.
-Sky66
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Nope, the Caribou ar also in war with the Griffons.
Wonder if the two nations gonna work together at some point.
4976377 I get the feeling this is going to become a total beat-down. It's a feel good story that flips the Caribou the bird in as smug a way as possible.
Fortunately it doesn't pretend to be anything else so I'm loving the undead pony out of it!
Well, that was unexpected. Still, it seems like all that's left to write is the Carribou being slaughtered. What could they possibly bring to match 3 Alicorns and an army that literally cannot die?
they cannot ie because of twilights magic
well, i would try to release Tirek, he would just absorb their magic, they would be dead...... again, and THEN i would start throwing
Thermal Magical Bombs to kill the rest, along with tirek
Welp , the caribou better have Tirek on their side or they are finished.
Unless Celestia/Luna wish to antagonize Twilight for what she did. In that case the internal struggle would tear Equestria apart in no time. I hope that this is not going to happen.
Then again , they have the elements against Tirek... except that they might not work with the undead mane 6.
But even then :
Twilight : Magic
Trixie : Generosity
Celestia : Loyaulty
Luna : Honesty
Eris : Laugher
They just need to find kindness... Lyra ?
Hehe, I wish I could assuage your fears more, everyone. But... give this a thought.
How have the Caribou managed to defeat every race they've come across? How did a race of basic Inuit raiders get the know-how to build a massive industrial base to field a mechanized army and air force, or build rockets with enough range to reach a target three thousand miles away?
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So. The only question I have here is, given how the diarchs just detonated a magical atomic bomb in a city, how they were ever -possibly- taken out in the first place.
And Discord as well, for that matter. I mean, this conflict has gone completely one-sided to the point it seems difficult to imagine how the 'backstory' could happen. I mean, I know it's really revenge porn out of dislike of Fall of Equestria, but this narrative feels like it's suffering from even bigger holes now than Fall does.
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The Sisters were taken out because they were in the direct line of fire. Being functionally immortal, the explosions around Equestria didn't kill them, but it knocked them unconscious for several weeks. Long enough for enough suppression spells to be dumped on them, and for their horns and wings to be sawed off. As we saw with Twilight, that isn't permanent, but it rendered them powerless at the time.
Discord... well, I'm writing her explanation right now, in fact!
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Well, I mean, if the explanation to everything is 'Doomsday Weapon'...eh. I mean, it's a narrative tool, sure, but it does keep these caribou as basically cervine Orks.
Why even have an army if alicorns can easily wipe out cities?
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Not easily, believe me.
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Even after the latest chapter...I'll see it through to the end, but it's feeling like there's this constant unending war of power creep going on, as each 'new' thing revealed is even stronger than the one before.
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Darn you... Gona have this stuck in my head until your next chapter comes out. I've had a hunch that there just pawns and the real threat will be revealed soon so I await the next part.
And now..we see what SHE has to say......cause what SHE says will either make or break it all.
wow the caribou done goofed and are now getting curb stomped
5701143 American History X style. Mouth on the kerb and everything.
This fic is fucking brilliant.
We don’t have time for rules.
TRANS CHAOS TRANS CHAOS 🏳️⚧️