Funhouse
"Well, this looks like the end girls” Scootaloo said horrified.
“Ah guess so…” Apple Bloom said , her voice panicked.
“We’ve had a god run, didn’t we guys!?!” asked Sweetie Belle terrified.
“I love you guys… you’re my best friends EVER” Scootaloo said bravely, yet scared.
The 3 fillies screamed in fear as they felt their bodies bend and break into new horrifying forms and becoming one with the “Funhouse”
3 days earlier...
“C’mon Sweetie Belle I wanna show you the new trick I just invented!” Scootaloo said excitedly.
"Okay,okay I'm coming Scoots" Sweetiebelle said exhausted.
As the teen Unicorn and Pegasus entered a remote clearing they met a familiar yellow earth pony with a red bow in her mane.As they approached her they noticed something off about their friend and former "Cutie-Mark crusader".
"Hey Applebloom,what's up!" Scootaloo asked happily.
"Nun' much just thinkin' 'bout stuff......." The yellow farm pony said half-concentraiting on her thoughts.Her friends just looked sideways and then they realized by what she ment.
"Well...ya know how i told ya about how Big Mac has been treatin' me and AppleJack lately..." she said.
"Well...ya see...he...kinda...did this..." As she said this she showed her friends her black eye and broken hoof.The girls only gasped in horror and anger.
" How did this happen." Sweetiebelle asked
"...Uhhh....well...he got really drunk and then he and AJ got into a argument about his behaviour, one thing lead to another and then they started fighting. Unfortunately, ah got in da middle of it while i was goin' downstairs to get something to drink..."she paused to emphasize the brutality she endured."Thankfully, Winona was nearby to break Big Mac offa me." she finished.
As if on cue the small collie came bounding up behind Sweetiebelle and Scootaloo, barking happily and returning to her mistresses' side.
"Ah'll be honest, if Winona wasn't there ah don't think i'd be standin' right now !" she finished talking and started to pet the dog along with her friends.
Later that day...
The three teenaged fillies ran toward Carousel Boutique in excitement to meet up with the current members of the "Cutie-Mark Crusaders", Dinky Doo, Pumpkin Cake, and Pound Cake, along with their fellow "Senior Crusader" Babs Seed who had recently recieved her cutie-mark of a half of an orange with seeds exposed, which contrasted with her cousins' mark of a apple.
"Hey guys" the three said in unison
"Hey girls, how's it goin!?!" Babs greeted them warmly.
"Hey!" the two young fillies and colt greeted happily
"So, what's on the agenda for today crusaders?" Sweetie asked.
"Oohh it's a good one, we're going into the Everfree Forest to find a beast and trap it!" Pumpkin Cake said.
"What in Equestria made ya think that would be a good idea!?!" Apple Bloom asked shocked.
The filly stepped back in surprise.Then her twin brother spoke bravely.
"Well...yeah why not...i mean... it's not like we've done it before and it could get us our cutie-marks." the brown pegasus colt stated.
As Apple Bloom was about to respond, Babs interrupted by putting up a hoof and signaling to not speak.
"In hindsight that does sound pretty dangerous but...if you guys really want to go then...i guess so" Scootaloo said half-serious.
"Alright!!" the crusaders said in unison.
Later that night...
The wind was howling wildly throughout the trees of the Ever Free Forest as they walked deeper into the forest.The 7 ponies walked in pack-formation as to not lose any pony.When they found a clearing they were surprised to see a run-down looking carnival fun house.
"Whoa...creepy-lookin' place." Apple Bloom said.
"Yeah...well let's go in!"Scootaloo said'
"What in the name of Luna are y'all talkin' about" Apple Bloom screamed.
"For once, i agree with Apple Bloom, why would we go in there?" Pound Cake said.
"Because..." Scootaloo started. "If you don't I"ll kick your sorry flanks in myself !!!" She finished harshly.
The other 6 ponies just shrugged and moved on, unaware that something terrifying was soon to happen.When they entered the house they were a little creeped out but they moved on.The lights inside were flickering like crazy when they shut off for at least 3 minutes. In that time they heard two blood-curdling screams.When the lights came back on, Pound and Pumpkin Cake were gone and all that was there was a pool of blood.
"W-where's the twins..." Babs said scared.
"Weren't they just right there by dinky." Sweetiebelle said
.
That's when they started running about calling for the Cake twins.Then the lights went out again, but this time for a full 5 minutes.During that time Babs and Dinky had gone missing too.Suddenly, Scootaloo stopped dead in her tracks and gasped in horror, for she found Pound Cake inside the murel on one of the walls looking tourchured as his little wings were being ripped off his body by a creepy clown.Stunned she flew back to where they agreed to meet.Meanwhile,Apple Bloom walked into the 'hall of mirrors' where she found Babs and Dinky stretched out to resemble mirrors, at that she screamed and ran back to the place where they'd agreed to meet.Sweetiebelle walked towards what seemed like the exit with the spinning wheel where she saw Pumpkin Cake , horn snapped off, and eternally spinning by her mane.Sweetiebelle screamed and she too ran back to where they'd plan to meet.When they were all there they told each other what they saw and how their murdered friends were found.Suddenly, they felt a powerfull laugh that sounded like a clown laughing as the floor turned into jell-o. and then they screamed.
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new fan fic
4875921 Apparently you didn't learn anything from you're last
train wreckstoryIt would have been a lot better if you made longer.
The pace...
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okay i get it i know i rushed but i'm back in school so...yeah i wanted to get this story out a.s.a.p so sorry if it sucks
not my best work at ALL
4907294 did I hear someone call for help on a fic i can help with what you need
4955006 YES!!! PLEASE HELP ME!!!!!
4955012 ok I will do you want me to proofread or edit or pre-read?
For notice I am useing my iPod is that ok?
4955091 i'll need you to pre-read and edit. thank you sooooo much!!!
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4955322 also if you could take a look at my other story 'Circus' i'd really appreciate it
4955322 no proublem my friend I will get it done as soon as posble
4955346 can you send me a link plz
4955346 I just finished it and it was reallygood
4955405 unfortunately,i don't know how to send a copy of a link.
4958446 hilight the name and are you useing a computer or a phone or an iPod?
For the computer right click on the name and a little box will pop up and find copy link than come to this page and click the icon that looks like a chain and right click on the first box and a little box will pop up than click paste
4958610 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/203621/circus
4958619 there's the link
4958627 haha you got yah good job man I will read it thanks
4880930 how rude
The story is way too short and rushed, and there is no real fear without surprises, plot twists, suspense, or detail. It also seemed like there needed to be a better reason for entering the fun house. It was Interesting concept, though.
so cool
5724812 Thanks even though, I personally say it sucks...
Whoa, that was scary, like a pony version of a horror movie!
good work!
7423854 Wow....uhhh....thanks! (Honestly...that's the second "good" comment I've got on this story....)
....,this could have been better.
7545753 I am aware. This story is simply....not the best but...it's....alright.
This story was okay.
8259376 I am aware that it was...simply ok.