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Phoenix Heart 20


"I often think that the night is more alive and more richly colored than the day."- Vincent Van Gogh

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This story is written for the "your O.C.s' cutie-mark" portion of the "Rate my O.C. close to 100 members Contest."

Now for the description: "'One night a long time ago...' That's how most of these stories are gonna start, not mine. See mine started on a night, maybe 20 years ago...." This is Moondance's story on how she got her cutie-mark.

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Comments ( 6 )

Before anyone says anything, I know it's kinda rushed. I've been really busy and I wanted to be one of the first entries for the contest :facehoof:. That doesn't really help the fact of this sloppy, rushed story...:raritycry:

This story did have some interesting ideas.

6583346 Thanks although I still feel it could be better......

6583353 Maybe you could dive deeper in another story. What were the costumes they were wearing? What are the dances for? thing like that.

6583653 perhaps I could on a later date.:pinkiehappy:

6583657 I'll be looking forward to reading it then. :rainbowdetermined2:

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