twilight becomes an alicorn and she is forced watch as each one of her friends die as the years go on.
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Its good
Brings up the subject of immortality and the more negative effects about it, showing the price might not be worth it. I give the story 7/10
4696940 you monster, you beat me to the very first comment. But I agree this story is really good.
This story is pretty good! ^^ Only critique is the lack of capitalization throughout.
4696954 I would be upset by that but with that profile picture i just cant! Kawaii
4696984 :3 thanks
Damn, these ponies know when they are going to die. It's almost like they took turns committing seppuku. Also I don't think you can die of a broken heart, unless it was actually broken. Especially for an immortal alicorn.
Must've commited seppuku.
Oh, and I read this while listening to Lullaby by Nickelback and I just finished watching Saving Private Ryan. Besides the occasional misspelling or grammar mistake, the story was decent. Not completely sure if it was the fic though, or just the combination of Lullaby/Private Ryan.
Has potential, but that's about it.
Darn. I wanted to write a story about ther death. Howell... guess i still can.
So what, do you ship Twinkie too?
Actually, it's kinda ironic, since Rarity had RD's weather cutie mark all those years ago.
4697354 I have the urge to write a death fic too.
I appreciate your effort, but there's about 106,395 "Twilight's Friends Die" fics that are better than this one. :/
You really need an editor, bro.
I think this is a troll fic.
4697719 then let's do it! maybe together, if you're intrested?
4698316 That would be awesome! Should we PM each other?
4698642 good for me
4698310
YOU DON'T FUCKING SAY?!
Do me a favor, both of you. Especially you, the one with the bad OC.
4704754 If we killed ourselves, we would no longer be able to anger those of lesser intelligence.
4697839 yes i know there is. this is just a tester story.
4697719 you should do it there really easy to write.
4706148 We are.
4706339 rock on! when u finish send me a link i would love to read it!
4697710 yea it is ironic.
4696984 lol its a pretty cool profile picture.
4706352 'Kay!
4704754
Well Jesus fucking Christ. I'm all for joking around, but telling someone to kill themselves for posting a story or a comment is just ridiculous, no matter how much you're joking.
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