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Manipulation. Lies. Deceit.
These are useful tools. Using them, a single man could destroy an army, decimate the strongest military installation, tear apart best friends and make them blow each other apart. Thousands of years ago, a civilization created crystals, whose only task was to do this. They had no goal but to be weapons.

Said civilization no longer exists.
But these crystals surface now and then.
Wherever they surface, they change the course of history.
One such crystal appeared on Earth, in 2399 AD, during the great civil war. The Terranian government, who ruled over a large portion of New Kinetisand, via unquestionable monarchy, were in combat with a rebellion, which called itself the Lost Swords. They found one such crystal, and used it to decimate enemy bases, simply by teleporting the crystal into it.
However, one day, said teleportation goes wrong.......

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Will gain tags as the story goes on.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 9 )

You fave but you do not comment. Why?
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!

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Cause most of us really don't have much to say.
Nice story by the way.

4729597
What I mean is, you must have a REASON for favoriting!
I must know, so that I don't ruin the story later on!
Also, thanks! :P

Promising start. However (and this isn't a bad thing necessarily) when you get to Twilight's portion, it seems as though you were trying to be amusing.

Just a thought: if you're going for a serious fic, perhaps comedy isn't the best way to go. I'm also a bit confused about the plot (or rather the lack of it). It shows promise, but as it is I'm (I believe the best term is) underwhelmed.

Also, I don't think the 'Human' tag can be applied here (unless the humans plan to have a bigger portion in the story).

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One, thanks.
Two, it isn't meant to be THAT seious. I just put it as dark as a just in case.
Three, this is the first story I'm writing that WILL have a plot :P
Four, yes the humans will be important. Later.
Thanks for the advice, it means a lot to me!

Comment posted by NobleValor deleted Jul 25th, 2014

4749476 I try to help out when and where I can. :twilightsheepish:

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