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Twilight Sparkle's life is going great. Then she starts having dreams, dreams in which Ponyville is completely destroyed. She's sure that her dreams will come true if she doesn't stop them, but what can she do to stop it, especially if nopony believes her?

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You should add the "Sad" "Tragedy" tags.
Nevertheless, the story seems nice. :twilightsmile:

So this is a more tucked up version of that episode about twilight thinking something bad is going to happen but wouldn't have if her future self didn't intervene in the past I like it

I would suggest adding a "dark" tag.

The story was OK but the ending was too predictable.

Pretty good. Not great, but good. Always nice to see these paradox-style stories.

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