Basically, this is a (technical) spin-off of a great series, (imo) from which I just had a rather stupid idea, which then turned into this.
Twilight is facing Celstia for something her friends technically caused, and is awaiting some minor punishment for the ruckus it caused. She however is shocked to hear what her punishment turns out to be. Or so she thinks.
In short: It's a very short story with lightly dark/morbid humor.
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Thats so fucking wrong, yet its hilarious,
"I DON'T WANT TO DIE A VIRGIN!"
What the hay? o.0 That was... interesting and funny.
I enjoyed it, although I really want to see the aftermath now. Makes me want to write about how she sees her previously beloved mentor after all this.
It would warrant an extra sentence or two to explain it was Luna's illusion from "kill her" onward. Otherwise it only seems implied.
Trollestia and Trolluna strike again!
... WHY is there no Luna emote!?
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WHY DO I FIND YOU ON EVERY STORY I READ!
and also, thunder wants me, to tell you, to tell D, that he said
"miss you, hope ill see you in the next chapter!"
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Umm?
If you talking about the story about her past, thats just about what happened to her, I'm not adding anything else so far.
I'll read!
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talking about stargazers story...which once again, i cant remember the name of
This was so hilarious, but so, so, so mean. I would kind of like to see the aftermath of this, though I doubt it will happen.
You should probably mention the name of the fic that inspired this in the description, i'm curious now.
292584 Actually, most of the story was based around that line alone xP It was one of the core "bad ideas" that sparked the whole thing hehe.
292702 Glad you seemed to enjoy it heh.
292734 If you'd want to, I'd let you write the follow up. Since I personally have no ideas of where this would go
292828 Tbh, I am not entirely sure what you mean with that.
But indeed they did. And I don't know, thought they ought to have one by now, even Twist got one xP
Heartless, immature, and horribly written - grammar, spelling and even vocabulary mistakes throughout.
A person would have to have not the slightest splinter of empathy to find this story amusing. Seek help.
293389 I wouldn't mind doing one, I just got no ideas whatsoever sadly ^^'
And currently stuck with writing 2 other fics. And a flash project, which is severely on hold, sadly.
293548 Sadly I don't remember it's name. But I do believe it was the Pony Psychology series... I think.
It at least were a fic that went from each of the mane 6 to the other.
293605 I'm openly pointing out I'm not good at writing due to syndromes, plus, English ain't my first language.
In either case, It's not meant to be taken seriously. It's Trollestia after all. And heck, if you think this one is "bad/heartless", I am glad you haven't seen... allot of what's out there.
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No need to be condescending. I've no doubt seen more of the horrors of humanity than you have, dear heart. Which is why I know better than to think this horror of a story is amusing.
293962 I don't see how that would come off as condescending, but eh, if you think it did. But in either case, it's there for those that like that kind of thing. Granted, this rating system is not the best. But for those that doesn't like a certain flavor of ice cream, no need to order it.
Recognized that "kill her" line instantly. From the twilight chapter of the pony psychology series :D
It's a lot funnier when you'lve read that one
310488 Ah yeah, that was the name of it.
For some reason this was the first to pop into my mind after I read that phrase :P
Interesting short story, though it seems alot more like a single chapter to a larger story to me. Would have been interesting to see this continue, but only from a 'Well Twilight is definitely scarred and probably has no interest in being around the princesses ever again after that' kind of way.
3398002 I've heard that before actually. But it's just a one shot as a whole. It could have been interesting to delve deeper into it though. Quite many of my fics have that actually... On a side note, if I recall this correctly, this story either only works very early in the canon, or I had some anti-magic included to prevent teleportation :P