I mostly write fictions based in the same general universe. They mostly star lightning. You want more? Well good luck with that.
In an alternate reality, Twilight Sparkle never moved to ponyville. Now she is learning at Canterlot College, very happily. But she feels as though shes missing something...a special somepony. Rainbow Dash made it into the same college for sports, and is quick to hit on anypony she can get her hooves on. Twilight is disgusted with Rainbow, but when she learns Rainbow is feeling the same pain as her, they bond.
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dat bushed twilight...
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Tons of grammatical mistakes, and you use "Twilight was" or "Twilight did this" far too much. It reads like a list almost. Needs a lot of work, but it was a good concept, so I say just get a pre-reader to skim through this, fix it up and come back.
423850 exscuse me while I save this pic XD
423918 thank you, I'll get someone to look it over on google docs when and maybe get a second draft done
Dun, Dun, DUUUUUUNN
423938 I'd be happy to proofread, criticize, and improve.
Just look at my stories to witness mah skillz.
going on my favs, will start when more chapters come out
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Go Ahead! xD
424064 yeah I'd love that a ton, I'll get you a link to the google doc version if you want
assualy and robery...
hmmmmm
assault and robbery
there we go...much better
424137 Please! As long as it's editable (I hate copying and pasting, because I always end-up totally re-writing it.
)
424139 nice save
Some mistakes, but it seems interesting. Why the hell did Rainbow attack Rarity?!
Intriguing good sir
424196 you will have to wait and see my friend
Interesting, however I shall wait for the revised edition.
425277 shouldnt have to wait too long
426059
Excellent! I shall be waiting with glee!
...Alright, UPDATE NAO!!!!
428214 FIMfic is being a douche and now letting me add chapters so we have to wait for it to get its shit together
428285 *flips table*
oh snap
Ah, to see people contributing to the community in unique and wonderful ways such as this fills my heart with joy.
And glad I am to be a part of this community.
3.5/5 stars for you, the concept is intriguing, the story is a little rushed and the grammar could use some work, but its got a lot of potential.
Don't worry mines rushed too.
Devilblade out.
431190 I'll go back and add more stuff, its rushed because I had to put in 1000 words before i could publish this and I just wanted to get the beginning out
put up a message or a new chapter labeled "Revised" when you finish the first chapter's rewrite pretty please
I rather liked it, would love to see the next chapter, so i can know what RD did this time
433398 I belive I have done this with the prequel succesfully
Fine I'll say it... MMMMOOOOAAAARRRRR
For the love of pie update!!!
Continue...
MOAR
I'm working on the story but there's been no updates to to issues with my Internet. As soon as it's fixed I'll update
"Twilight looked back, obviously surprised, and responded with a simple: END OF CHAPTER"
Does anyone else think that's kind of a strange response?
A very nice chapter I can’t wait to see what was twilight answer to dash’s question about going on a date with her.
897033 nah, it's a normal response for... Pinkie Pie
you bastard covered bastard with bastard filling.
...i hate cliffhangers
898554 how did you know I had bastard filling? That was supposed to be secret...
899129 simply because every one is a bastard covered bastard with bastard filling
Oh, and while I'm here don't hold your breath for another chapter until sometime after the 17th
ugh fine
OH you authors and your cliffhangers! I think this is an excellent start and I am very much looking forward to the progress of this story.
Hurry up and be sometime after the 17th already!
Ill see you if cliffhanger hell
Oh you little bastard... toying with us like that
glad to see this story isn't totally dead
thanks for the update. now to wait for the next one...
but... i... WHAT!?!?
1298520 I love messing with you people with cliffhangers
The plot thickens
well... i... i dont even know.... I am now concerned...