Scorpan. Tirek. Two names that have shared a common kinship, uprising, and legacy. One found peace at heart in a new land. The other, a renewed malice for what he declared a birth right. In the end, they are still brothers to the bitter end.
watching 'Twilight's Kingdom', I couldn't help but wonder what more there could have been in that 30 second backstory about Tirek and Scorpan. They were brothers, one was imprisoned, and the other went home. Though, what if there was more to it, along with the biggest question I had with being 'what did Tirek do to Scorpan since he is still alive and Scorpan isn't even around?' This is my answer.
2:30 in the morning as I post this...I really need to sleep
Wow, this is very good. A nice head-canon to what could of happened between Tirek and Scorpan when he went back to his homeland. But still, a very good story indeed. Characters well written, dialogue is good, but you didn't describe the scenery in extremely vivid detail. Not that I'm complaining, of course. I could easily imagine where they were but I'm just putting out suggestions for you in case you write more stories.
Good day! Oh, and have a moustache for your incredible story!
-Sky Thunder
Oh wow...
Very interesting story so far.