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Wind Scribe
The Ride may be coming to an end, but who says we can't keep on riding anyway -Says the guy straddling furniture at the Ikea store
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I swear my eyes were watering as I read this.
Both from how you described her symptoms, and from how it made me feel for both Derpy and Dinky.
Sad, yet nicely written.
It's Nice.
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Wow... the realy sad thing here is that this is the only chapter
>only chapter
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It didn't look like a short story, it feels like the beginning of a story, not a story per se.
It feels like you left the job unfinished.
Nice written, but unfinished.
But I can't be blind, I just can't!
Loved the story by the way, really well written
*a tear starts slowly rolling down cheek in the middle of class
a friend whispers, "Uhh... are you crying?"
"What! No..no I'm not crying it's liquid pride." I whisper back.
"Um... I saw nothing..." He mutters back.
Ok, ok, enough cheesy stuff. Now where did I pu- Ah, here it is!
4408499 My work here is done
Yes, yes it is
I did not want to overstay my welcome with this one
Alright, alright already...I'll CONSIDER making something else for this.
4408519 Umm, thank you?
4408727 Again, my work here is done
4408792 Sometimes, life is just cruel like that. I strive to be just as cruel sometimes...I'm going to hell for that one
4414545 You are absolutely welcome
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I agree with puropogo. Too short. Makes me want............. more. Good when there's a sequal out, very, very bad if you're planning on making one-shots.
Sad, but too short.
I liked it a lot. But you would've gotten more tears out of me if you made it longer. Uh, hang on. Let me think of a reason why you should make it longer... Uh, oceans! If you made this longer, we can help save the oceans! YEEEAAAAAA... 