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Rakoon1

I'm a Portuguese author who wants to share his stories.

Rakoon1 Joined 21st Sep, 2013 · Offline

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Distorted Flare
Distorted Flare #1 · Jun 13th, 2014 · · ·
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Really awkward to read when you use penis and then fuck up some of the sentences. Use member or any other deviation of the word penis. Penis sounds way to childish.

PigglePoop
PigglePoop #2 · Jun 13th, 2014 · · ·
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Some errors but interesting concept

Mad Hatter
Mad Hatter #3 · Jun 13th, 2014 · · ·
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It's... believable in terms of match-ups. Honestly, you should rewrite it for grammar to make it more readable. There's a solid fic in here, it just needs refinement.

Rakoon1
Rakoon1 #4 · Jun 17th, 2014 · · ·
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4561416 In my blog post about my mature stories, I say this kind of stories aren't connected with my other stories and with each others.

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