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Life. It's one of the most precious gifts in the universe. Tiny heartbeats knit in the womb, little souls brought into being by the love of two parents. Fluttershy and her husband Hailstorm wake up one morning to realize she's feeling strange, but soon will realize their own little miracle is about to arrive.

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Aww I love this story it is just so heart-warming and I'm usually into war and stuff like that so you sir are amazing :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:
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A lovely start. Plenty of cute descriptions.

The character list was a bit misleading. It might help readers who are searching for Flarity understand that this is not such a thing. It usually seems kind and appropriate to note marriage to OC characters.

one quick thing, in the beginning, you said that Fluttershy and Hailstorm had been married for three months, then said that their wedding had been two weeks prior. other than that, pretty good. favorited!:twilightsmile:

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Oh fiddlesticks! thanks for catching that. I'll fix that sometime tomorrow if I can.

All right. For a split second after reading the description and seeing the character list, I thought that Rarity was going to be their child.
Silly brain! That's not right! :facehoof:

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:pinkiegasp: I certainly didn't intend for that.

Yes, of course. But my brain is weird.
Once I was picking blueberries and thought "What makes blue again? Oh right! Green and yellow!" Then... "Oh silly me. Green and yellow don't make blue, yellow and green make blue!"
So...don't take anything I say seriously. :pinkiehappy:

Another story, another favorite! Just make sure to complete this one.

JT

Waiting for the next chapter....Pass me a sandwich.

JT

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*sigh* Life is full of tough choices

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Why not both? =)

And just so you know, this story is on temporary hiatus until I finish some of my others.

3242092 Temporary hiatus?

Hate to sound like a humongous jerk but one would hope this story isn't dead.

Ponies don't have periods /)-•

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