Twilight Sparkle has made a breakthrough. Inspired by previous events, she has devised a way for ponies to travel into space... and faster than the speed of light. A test of this technology brings incredible events into fruition, for both Equestria and their entire world. But just as visitors from other worlds make their presence known, dark forces begin to move in the court of Equestria, threatening to dethrone the princesses and plunge the country into a totalitarian nightmare. The ponies, with the help of old friends and new friends, must band together to stop this threat once and for all and save their land and their people.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 40 )

Wonder if it's the Humans . Or if not what other race?

Keep reading and you'll see.

Well written and a very interesting concept. I didn't spot any errors, either. I'm feeling generous at the moment so you get 5 stars, a comment and a track :twilightsmile:.

:pinkiehappy: A SEQUEL!?!?!? My life is complete.

You may take all of my pinkies!

I absolutely loved aliens in Equestria! I can't even contain my squees of delight!!!

Thank you for reading. :pinkiesmile:

Perhaps you can help me? I'm in need of some advice on where to take the next chapter.

Well I'm not much of a writer, but I'll try and think of something!:pinkiehappy:

I for one am crossing out the Aliens being the Aliens from The 'Aliens' movie.... granted those usually are referred to as Xenomorphs but....

Sorry, no xenomorphs here

Those things are creepy :pinkiegasp:

*Hissssssss* *Knocks out lights*

By Celestia's beard, Moar! :flutterrage:

Looking good. There are a few grammatical errors scattered through, but it is definitely a great read.

MY..... GOD!!! I love this story, and my only regret is that I didn't check fim fiction earlier!

I have to admit, I was a little worried that that this died, but it was SO worth the wait.

Take all my pinkies! :pinkiesmile::pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile:

And the next chapter is on the way. Stay tuned. :twilightsmile:

If this plays out like Star Trek: Enterprise, I'll be even more impressed. :pinkiehappy:


Luna, the mane 6, and other character could become the first starship crew to explore space, like Archer and the NX Enterprise.

Whens the next chapter being publish?

As soon as possible. I'll probably start writing again when I get back from vacation.

In the meantime, what did you think of this one?

Moar is coming, be patient loyal reader :pinkiesmile:

This is great!^_^

A good fanfic!^_^

Please write more!^_^

You really think so? What did you like the best?

Sweet fic, even if the update speed is only slightly faster then your average glacier.

Please...post more.


Only he knows that. I bring it up every now and then in our convo's on skype only to be told to wait,

I suppose thats all we can do.

Finally...we get to meet the big bad. :pinkiehappy:

The description of the bad guy makes me think of an argonian from eldar scrolls.

This story is awesome. The mistakes are a little off putting, there's quite a few instances of they're and their mix ups, and a rather hefty amount of spelling errors. But, apart from that it's good.

I'll definitely be keeping track of this little gem :pinkiehappy:

3949943 I've since read another fic and forgotten them. I'd have to re-read the story to find them xP. Sorry, I should've listed a few in my prior comment :facehoof::twilightblush:


I could proofread it if you want :pinkiehappy:

863222 note, twilight' s mom is named Twilight Velvet. Other than that best did I've ever read. I'm planning on posting something similar on my account.ill notify when

If you want we could collab I have a few ideas for a story. And need another brain and person to talk to. It has to do with the alien thing but more localized to their star system

Idk if I have time for a collaboration but if you want I can take look at your ideas and give my thoughts.

Cool thanks

I was thinking maybe that a strange creature(I couldn't find art to go with it.) That was blue, had odd antennae, purple ethereal mane(like celestias) that was covered in novas and stars and nebulae. his name would be Nova Star and his magic would be very powerful matching celestia's own power. And that he would fall in love with Princess Celestia. Also he arrived by crashing into Ponyville's fountain and the shockwave is felt all the way to the Crystal empire.

The Altarians are like modern style Aldari that are friends with the humans.

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