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It's so good! So Good!
What happened Rarity?
Got the shit scared out of you?
This is going to be awesome.
Bloody brilliant!
Can't stop laughing too much hilarity
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I'm loving the dynamic between those two or should I say three?
so good!
I have never seen a story quite like this before.
I like it!
I love this too much. 10/10, would read again.
So this is part of the Ivoryverse now? Oh geez, the Species Appreciation Day chapter for these guys is going to be hilarious.
Guess Rarity's not used to being given head.
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Sander's a fuckin' crazy. Actually loony. Nothing he's done makes any logical sense. So, Psycho approved.
It may behoove you though to slow down and begin detailing his motives and background. As is, he's coming off as a creep in a cheap fuck-fiction and I have a feeling that's not what your going for.
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It's all jokes, and he hasn't done anything overtly crazy.
The head thing was a terribly mean joke, but that's all he does. I guess it doesn't come across. Guess I'll have to make it come across.
There is so much i could say about your stories. how funny ridiculous and in general great fics. But frankly this one comes so far out of leftfield for me that it's practically out of the ballpark.
So i hope this simple praise will do.
Lol.
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This could be a sitcom, it's brilliant! Needs a catchy title though...
Three's Herding
Headless in Ponyville
Bollocks!
(I just want to hug and brush Dust all day though, she's so cute!)
Tsundere headless pony?Yes pls.
He's just a big ol' troll, isn't he
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This needs a comedy tag. Sander's and Cosmic's back and forth with each other deserves it.
THis story is crazy. I like it.
I was pretty skeptical about this the first time I saw it, but goddman this a great story
This is so damn amusing. MUST HAVE MOAR!
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A+ comment
I laughed for an hour
4466071 Phew, thank god, thought I was getting ahead of myself there for a moment.
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If I laughed any harder at this, my appendix would have exploded.
Perfect picture, Hat.
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IMHO, actually, i think it does make sense. He's breaking through her fear, her (very) old defense mechanisms. But he also doesn't let her fall back into her old habits (she want to be left alone, out of fear).
She was alone for more or less 300 years, not having control over anything but her ears and voice. Having the company of her body she only have vague control over and have pseudo-conversations with. Everyone else, ever, feared her. Shunned her. Maybe abused her. No one helped her (ever) before. She is scared, she want ponies away from her since all they bring is grief and pain.
So... he just hammer her with a non-stop barrage of "nice" and "humor" and "random", as opposed to anger, fear, abuse and judgement. That's all she knows, that's what she expect will happen.
So he takes it all with a smile, a laugh and doesn't get angry. He shows her that her reactions are defensive by calling them out. She insult, call him a perv, bites him... All stuff to offend, anger and basically have him go away. He doesn't let her make him angry. He deflect, ignore and redirect all that and twist it to his advantage. He knows what he's doing.
IIRC he want to work in the school as a teacher? Its likely something he's been trained in.
By doing what he does he shows her, clearly, that he doesn't fit her views at all, that stuff have changed. She doesn't need to be scared anymore. It will likely take a while to bring down her walls, and his method, while they seem crazy are better (imho) than trying to not offend her at every turn and treating her like a fragile powerless delicate thing with white gloves. What he lack in "finesse" he makes up with being honest and having impact.
Plus, it also impact the pony community at large, showing them she is harmless, that they were jerks for treating her like they did. That's why (i think) he made Rarity walk Dust around the town.
Except maybe that one mare who want to capture her? Dunno why she think Cosmic Dust is a "thing" to be "confiscated"..
Sander keeps surprising me in a very good way.
Both Dust and Cosmic are uttely adorable in completely opposite ways.
The interactions are both food for thought and fuel for laughter.
All in all, I am having a blast reading this
This is 10/10.
Such an exciting read.
Do you have to work hard to create such awesome comedic scenes or does it come naturally? You seem to excel at them.
Also nice to see Cosmic calming down. kinda
Tenouttaten! Would read this!
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Oh wait, I already did.
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Good stuff!
4465081 It's about the Oreo squared.
Y'know, it seems like it was just a few days ago that this story came out. Oh wait, it did! Congrats! You're on the popular list!
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This was featured.
4467743 Oh wait... I think I have the wrong story then. But good job to the author anyway!!!!
4467743 Oh wait, no I don't. I liked this story when it first came out on May 25th. I must've forgotten that it was featured a while after. I meant to do this earlier.... Now I feel like an idiot..... Oh well! Cheerio!
Please tell me his first name is Colonel.
4466639 It's okay. I understand. That's your perception. I know the reasons behind why Sandy is doing his do. But that's the thing, it's not explained. Sir Hat isn't explaining his characters actions at all. Sanders just does. There was no moment of "Oh, I have the most brilliant idea to prank a mare who I don't know all that well and is doing me a huge favor by harboring a headless body that's wanted for some convoluted reason." He just grabbed Cosmics head and did the thing. All I'm saying that this is a good idea and I want to see the story and author evolve. Right now, it lacks depth. Character does because author wants and it's not all that logical.
Also, I'm curious to see how a person has consensual sex with a singular body with two distinct parts and minds.
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I don't explicitly state things much. I do, but I like to give people a little bit of room to put themselves in their place.
And he grabbed her out of the woods. Basing of the fact he took in Dust, treating her like a lost animal, he wouldn't just leave someone helpless in the woods, and in her state, she was indeed helpless.
These things evolve in time, and you must trust that I have an idea of what to do.
*Edit*
You also just explained why I don't explicitly state things. The audience figures it out on their own. You're smarter than you think, even if you don't realize it.
4470134 I trust that you know what you want because I'm still reading it. And I know that I said that I said something that was a thing indeed!
But I stand by my criticism. Sandy feels unreal because of his lack of emotion and reason. It's a little off putting because other characters are believable in that they reason and emote but the character that's supposed to be the audiences stand in doesn't. Outside of lines of direct action, he's just dialogue. Because of that, the jokes fall a little flat or come off as strait forward remarks.
Not that it's not entertaining, mind.
i dont know how to handle this story anymore, im always laughing!
4472723 Do you know how few of Einstein's fellow scientists signed his protest against Germany entering WWI?
You should really find out more about scientists before attempting to understand us.
We are not anything like as moral and altruistic as you seem to believe. All have a spark of madness, for only one with at least a little obsessive tendencies can withstand the tedium and repetition of research.
We're all mad here... join us down the rabbit hole.
4473262 I have respect for you. You coming to the Hatter's tea party? I'm bringing the muffins.
I retract my previous statement. I don't like Cosmic. Ilove her!
[Just a general warning, this is PROBABLY just senseless ramblings of nothing NOW GOOF LUCK BRO!] GEEZE this guy SEEMS ridiculously manipulative, telling her she has only TWO options of two evils... (Or what seems to be two evils... I AM MOST LIKELY misinterpreting this BUT it seems off somehow...) I am not even sure if this GUT feeling is even backed by anything but hell, Cosmic can't exactly leave without her body, which he seems to always separate making Cosmic defenseless I AM PROBABLY JUST BUZZKILLING THIS! So far I like the story just... uncomfortable as to how he makes her often defenseless (WHY AM I POSTING THIS?!) AMAZING idea though regardless and I am loving it... DON'T GET ME WRONG THOUGH I LIKE THE STORY!
You're awesome dude.
I don't know if It's the accents I hear when I read the parts, but I find this story and It's characters very charming.
4597389 Well... by this point she has survived 300 years in the woods. Pretty sure she can handle a living room.
Also, immortality.